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I got third place for this!
Thanks for all your support! ^^
Submitted: May 30, 2009
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ohmgoshohmgoshohmgosh.
dis is soooo damn ncie dahling.
i lurveeee the poem loads laods loads...
dis is sooooooo damnn nice!!!!
wah piang. how u manage to write like dat?
i seriously cant figure out...
anyways.
tks so much for ur bear hugs!!
really cheeered me up dear :D
i hope u win win win.
den find many many many sponsers to help u publish ur bks and poems.
and den become top hits.
nxt yr i'll be at the world bk fair looking out for your bks. :D
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LoL! Thank youu sooo much!! :) *Gives you tons more bear hugs* Love you so much! *More bear hugs* :D
Sat, May 30th, 2009 8:30am
This is really good, I like how you used the drawer as the thing that hid your feelings. And I was wondering, can you visit my page and read my poems? I like getting people's thoughts on my poems.
Sat, May 30th, 2009 3:46pm
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Thank youu! :) Okay I'll go and read them now :)
Sat, May 30th, 2009 8:48am
This is really great. I love the symbolism you had with the drawer. That was what tied it all together and gave the poem the feeling it needed. I love this poem.
Sat, May 30th, 2009 3:49pm
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Thank youu! :)
Sat, May 30th, 2009 9:01am
(Dannielle commenting) This is great, this is probably one of my faves :D Good luck !!
Sat, May 30th, 2009 6:25pm
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Thank youu! :)
Sat, May 30th, 2009 6:39pm
Really beautiful! Great work.
good luck with the challenge, i hope you win because is a really beautiful poem.
XD ~Jenn
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Thank youu! Thanks soo much! :)
Sat, May 30th, 2009 6:34pm
Wow, and you're only 12?
Damn, wish I could write poetry this good when I was your age!
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THank youu! You have no idea how much this means to me :)
Sun, May 31st, 2009 7:06am
Oh wow.
This is beautiful.
:)
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Thank youu! :)
Sun, May 31st, 2009 7:06am
WOW! That was great! You should totally win! I loved how you used the drawer as the symbol of sadness and the container as hope! Loved It! You should really write more poems!
Sun, May 31st, 2009 10:45am
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Thank youu! :) Maybe I will write some poems from time to time. :) I've entered "And I Thought Love Didn't Exist..." into a challenge so it probably won't be that soon though :)
Sun, May 31st, 2009 7:29am
wow...are you sure this is your first attempt...i loved it from the bottom of my heart...it was marvellous, awesome and everything good :D...actually i am so overjoyed that i cant express it in words...
i am definitely going to give a "i like it vote" and you will undoubtedly win the contest...
you are a great poet...
good luck!!
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Yep, it's my first attempt. Thank youuu sooo much! :)
Sun, May 31st, 2009 7:26am
(becka)
this is amazing!!!!!
do you really not write much poetry...
if not you should write some more.x.x.
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Thank youu! I usually write novels. :D Maybe I will. Thanks again! :)
Sun, May 31st, 2009 9:33pm
This is great, I love it! It doesn't seem at all like a first attempt. You should definitey do more poetry. :)
Sun, May 31st, 2009 7:03pm
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Thank youu! It is my first attempt at writing a real poem. Before, I've messed about but never really wrote anything. :) Thanks again! :D
Sun, May 31st, 2009 9:34pm
Very Good! I'm glad she found hope. I'm in the challenge also.. Good Luck!
Angellynn :D
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Thank youu! :) Good luck to you too! :)
Sun, May 31st, 2009 9:35pm
I like it. It was a nice poem showing how hope came. I hope you like my stories are you able to read them?
Mon, June 1st, 2009 6:08pm
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Thanks. :) Yes I can read them and I love them! :)
Mon, June 1st, 2009 9:39pm
OMG!! I loved it! It was soo good. It makes me wanna cry. Great job!
Fri, June 5th, 2009 9:58pm
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Thank youu! :D
Sat, June 6th, 2009 1:33am
this is great - thanks for re-commenting
Sat, June 6th, 2009 6:24pm
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Thanks! ;D
Sun, June 7th, 2009 12:39am
Nice poem!!! =D
Fri, June 19th, 2009 12:24pm
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Thanks! ^^
Fri, June 19th, 2009 6:07am
This is really great! I'm sorry about the winners not being up yet, I'm tracking down all the people who joined to try and figure out the winners and all! They should be up tomoroow or today! Thanks! Please keep a look out!
Sat, July 4th, 2009 11:55am
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Thanks! ^^ Okay. Thanks for hosting the challenge! It was really fun! ^^
Sat, July 4th, 2009 5:17am
Yukie: whoa! this maybe the greatest poem you've made to this date, yet! Mika-chan!
Syrrh: it's very honest and a play of words and thoughts that binds congruent and whole!
Sapphire: i like it.
Eriza: very much a thought of a heartbroken girl, and gained her strength back! very nice, Mika-chan! keep flying even if this is your experience or just fiction, i'll definitely cheer for you!;)
Macie: the picture of Misuzu Kamio adds very much to the whole poem, too!;)
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Thanks, thanks, thanks and thanks! XD I just love reading your comments! It always makes my day! :)
Sun, July 5th, 2009 9:11am
To see the picture and then write a poem. You have done a great job. Keep writing you are good
Mon, July 6th, 2009 11:15am
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Thanks! :)
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Helena Parris
I loved it! It's a beautiful poem.
Sat, May 30th, 2009 3:15pmAuthor
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Thank youu! I'm so glad you like it. :) It's my first attempt at a poem and my first time taking part in a challenge :)
Sat, May 30th, 2009 8:29am