Night Time Land (Gadzookziie Spice 99's Challenge)

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This is for Gadzookziie Spice 99's challenge. I have to write a poem for her cousin to help him sleep. I hope it helps! :)

Night Time Land
Where fairies sprinkle magic dust
Where kings and queens reside
Where all things never rust
Where godmothers stay at your bedside
Where you can be anyone
An author, teacher or rock star
Where everyone has fun
On the beach under the sun
At the end of every tiring day
You return home, everything planned
No matter what anyone might say
The best place to be – Night Time Land

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I got third place for this!
Thanks for all your support! ^^


Submitted: June 04, 2009

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Gadzookziie Spice 99

Woop woop :) This is really good - Adam loves it :) Thankyou x.x.x.

Thu, June 4th, 2009 5:35pm

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Thanks! I'm so glad he likes it. :) I hope it helped the both of you :)

Thu, June 4th, 2009 10:35pm

enduringthedarkness15

Awww that's cute. I'm glad Adam loves it.
I might use it for my neices and nephews. Lol.
Thanks for writing this it's really awesome!

Thu, June 4th, 2009 6:09pm

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Thanks. I'm really glad he likes it too. :D Really? I hope they like it too. Thanks!! :D

Thu, June 4th, 2009 10:41pm

NessieBlack

*yawns* Love it! *yawns some more*

Thu, June 4th, 2009 6:16pm

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LoL! Thanks soooo much! :D

Thu, June 4th, 2009 10:40pm

Helena Parris

I enjoyed this. I think I need some coffee...

Thu, June 4th, 2009 7:31pm

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LoL! Haha. Thanks!! :D

Thu, June 4th, 2009 10:34pm

Jordin Renee Phoenix

AWW!!! It's freaking rad. Now you make me want to go back to night time land even though I just left like ten minutes ago. ^_^ Keep it up Mika!!!!

Thu, June 4th, 2009 7:32pm

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Thank youu!! :D Haha! Thanks sooo much! :D

Thu, June 4th, 2009 10:39pm

10bookgurlii26

Awesome! Good luck with the 'Write him a bedtime story' thing! I liked this! =D

Fri, June 5th, 2009 3:30pm

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Thanks! :)

Fri, June 5th, 2009 8:41am

dinosawr

looks like i got some competition! this is so cool! love it! :)

Fri, June 5th, 2009 8:40pm

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Haha! Good luck to the both of us then. :) Thanks! :D

Sat, June 6th, 2009 1:12am

twilight23

Great job!! That was really good!!

Fri, June 5th, 2009 9:45pm

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Thank youu! :D

Sat, June 6th, 2009 1:29am

Vampirate

I really like this!

Sat, June 6th, 2009 4:08am

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Thanks :)

Sat, June 6th, 2009 1:33am

tammanna

wow that was so beautifullllllllllllll...
it would definitely help her cousin sleep

Sat, June 6th, 2009 6:25am

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Thanks! I hope it does! :)

Sat, June 6th, 2009 1:34am

violin

Cute!!! Children will love it... the magic dust will bring them lovely dreams...

Sat, June 6th, 2009 7:29am

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Thanks! :) I hope it will :D

Sat, June 6th, 2009 1:28am

yuu shindemura

whoa, this poem's one fairy tale made for magnificence! it feels like a dream realm, too!

hence, it's simply fantastic throughout,and magical! mika-chan!XD

Sun, June 7th, 2009 3:02pm

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Thank youu soooo much! :D

Sun, June 7th, 2009 8:20am

CrazyKatieChan

It sounds like heaven to me!!! =D

Fri, June 19th, 2009 12:26pm

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LoL. Yeah! =D

Fri, June 19th, 2009 6:08am

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