My Attempt at Some Haiku Deals!

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  No Houses

We'll see!

 

My Attempt at Some Haiku Deals!

 

Five heads, grin from pikes

Seven decades is so long

The food in jail sucks!

 

 

Sunlight shines on me

Summer is hazy, lazy

Breeze touches my face

 

 

The writing scribe scribes

Subjects so hard to come by

Excellence, who knows?

 

 

If writing falls down

In an on-line cyber-place

Does anyone hear?

 

 

Stuck in the same place

Cannot move, or get away

Days repeat again

 

 

Ebb and flow of days

From this window flying by

Just a fun house ride

 

 

Trying out, all new

Who is to say yeah or nay?

Just sounds good to me

 

 

My life-line, sad keys

Tell a tale that never ends

Broken record plays

 

 

Got writer’s block, bad

Mind is just blank; what the hell?

There must be something

 

 

Broken man gets by

By writing down all his thoughts

Some are just crazy

 

 

Sawed-off thoughts run

My head is bursting with stuff

Some good, most bad; s**t!

 

 

Five, seven, five, done

This haiku deal; it frustrates

Overflow of words

 

 


Submitted: April 16, 2012

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true reborn

if you want my comment I think it's pretty great,and I would like you to read my poem:the life of a dead man

Tue, April 17th, 2012 12:42am

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Thanks; I will

Mon, April 16th, 2012 5:56pm

dibbledabble

Emotive, touching, funny, sad, human. EXCELLENT!

You really got hold of these Haiku's and breathed life into the words. Seams you have risen to the 5 7 5 challenge

Dibs

Tue, April 17th, 2012 5:35am

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Thanks Dibs!

Tue, April 17th, 2012 6:17am

Wilbur

Oh mike, these are so well conceived and written. They pack a punch in their very brevity. Sunshine and lazy hazy - lovely. Cyber space and lost writing, love it; fun house ride and ground hog days - oh Mike...
and now this format? it's perfect for your writing and your thoughts. Bitter bullets or bright blinks...
I applaud, and yell 'encore'!
Best very best regards. So glad you told me to come back and check it out. Connie

Tue, April 17th, 2012 4:23pm

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Thanks Connie; I was hoping I didn't make a fool out of myself by using the wrong format!

Tue, April 17th, 2012 10:08am

sherry1

Wow you did an excellent job with this! Seriously your words gave it life and meaning. Kudos. :) Sherry

Wed, April 18th, 2012 5:59am

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Thanks Sherry!

Wed, April 18th, 2012 6:19am

Irwinagain

Good write Mike. I enjoyed reading them.

Wed, April 18th, 2012 9:12am

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Thanks Irwin!

Wed, April 18th, 2012 6:18am

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