Poem by: Milo Heroine
fantasy, poetry, beauty
Submitted: February 20, 2013
The Truth is...
By: Milo H.
The Truth is mine
No longer yours
It takes my heart
To uncharted Shores
Like my heart
In silent screams.
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An ethereal beauty. I really like the feel of it, even if I'm too simple-minded to understand it.
I really really liked it - thank you for sharing it :)
Simple yet somehow very strong in meaning. Really liked it! Gets a like from me!
Again, simple. It gives a sense of narrative power and ownership. Usually poems like this are written as personal reflection, and I certainly hope the best for you.
Nicely done! I love metaphors!
I would have to try your technic.
Writing a poem while watching myself
on the mirror. Crazy!
I do too, teach how to say poetry :)
The final line 'Silent screams' is such a sad line yet gives the reader imagary that links with the poem. Make sure you check my my two new poems :) like and comment thanks x
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