Horrible Liveing Conditions.

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was amazing.....!

I like this you could tell that the person is very furious! and mad it short and explains a lot i like it!

sad but true. it was good.(;

wow wow wow ...................amazing sj

A good poem but about a sad subject. And one many do live with this poem has a special meaning to me and I understand exactly the emotions you have in it. The person I wanted gone was my step father. If you get a chance read "Young Life" Well written

This is really powerful. You can hear the despair in the lonely voice of the speaker. It's amazing! Hope you can check out my poems. Great job :)

Anger anger anger! lol I love this.

People often do find the courage to make a stand against all odds. You don't find this in poetry much, which is what makes this quite unique to me. :D

Wonderful.

nice idea! you seem very confident in your writing, eh? to write something like this? emotional. unique. GREAT JOB! kris. ;D

wow...this is awesome.unique. different.wow.

fantastically written and beautiful expressions!!
great going mima :)

Well done. Such vivid imagery of such a dark subject. I could close my eyes and see it all. Well put together, with very strong emotions in place so the reader can relate to the situation.

wow thats really deep! but it was an awesome poem!
hope u can check out some of my poetry...=]

You described so much in so little! Great job!

SO MUCH EMOTION!! I completely loved it. You can see and feel the pain like you were actually there. This is one of the best poems i have read. You are such a great writer! :) Keep writing poems, and I'll keep coming haha. GREAT JOB! Take care and God Bless!! ~~smiles and laughs--Cassie~~

wow, this is really good! the name... could use some work, but yeah, this is good.

Wow, the anger and intensity towards the poem of this poem is tangible, and I love the determination of the speaker shown in the last line: 'We will thrive.' There's no 'if' about it - they WILL succeed without the person the speaker talks about. As for the name of the poem, how about simply taking an important line from the poem, maybe something like 'My life' or 'This is my home'?

Wonderfully written poem :) Great work!

A great poem about a sad subject. And it makes you realize that life can be so much worse for other people than it is for you.