Look What You've Done.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Non-Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic
This girls brother has been dragging her mother and herself down. The brother just dosn't know when to give up.

Submitted: April 30, 2009

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Crying her self to sleep each night.

wakeing depressed.

Look whats you've done to us.

Look what you've done to me, big brother.

I can't even breath in thie house.

Can't see.

I need to escape my fate.

Look at the trap you set for me.

Im stuck here for ever.

Why'd you put me in thie situtaion.

carry me down to the ground.

your the one that's going down,

but you have to carry Mom and I with you.

Look at us.

Note from athour, ths is a first draft so dont kill me, i know it needs to be fixed. but the idea of the poem came to me one night and i had to type it down, ill edit it when i get my laptop back form being fixed. love to all you!


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