Looking For You...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic


I’ve been looking,
Looking for years.
I’ve been searching,
The hills-
The skies.

For you.

I’ve been in search of the perfect man.
The man that I happened to bump into on the street.
The man I’ve been looking for,
For too long.
The man that stood in front of me.

I was to dumbfounded by your beauty,
That I didn’t respond when you said sorry.
I didn’t respond when you walked around me.
Nor did I respond when I watched you walk out of my life once again.

Only did I notice what happened,
When another strange bumped me.
And there I stood,
Stuck in the spot.

As I felt my heart brake,
The tears weld up.

I never understood love at first sight..
Until now.

I was broken,
Down to the core.
But I felt a new emotion.
I was more determined to find you,
More than ever before.

Life teaches you a lesson.
don’t fall into the trap,
If you happened to tumble in..
Be determined to find a way out.

Never let things hang off the edge,
It’s bound to fall in.

Submitted: February 03, 2010

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Nanna Marie Andersen

Yes first comment! :D

Really great poem! I wished it was not all boxed up, but more separated... But that's just me... :D

Beautiful writing style and great flow! :D

// Nanna :)

Wed, February 3rd, 2010 11:47pm


rawr. ill fix that up. lol.
i didnt want that either.

thank you for the comment.

Wed, February 3rd, 2010 3:47pm


This is really good i liked it thank you for telling me

Wed, February 3rd, 2010 11:48pm


thank you very much .:]

Wed, February 3rd, 2010 3:49pm

Susan Vallante

Aww, I felt that, that tug when you realize he's walked away forever.

As always very good lady!

Thu, February 4th, 2010 2:13am


thank you very much. :]

i was looking for something different in this poem..something more deep. but i guess i got something good out of it. ;]

Wed, February 3rd, 2010 6:36pm

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