And I cried

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

just something i came up with PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!

the rain hit my window

as it poured down onto the streetees

it made my heart weep

the rain the weeping

it was all going to hurt

on drop after another

tears of angels matched the tears of mine

drip, drip, drip

the tears hit my floor

and i cried.

Submitted: November 22, 2008

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This was really heart felt and I like how you used the rain to help me understand how sad the person was.
I really liked it. Great Job.

Fri, May 1st, 2009 1:15pm


thank you and i'm really glad you liked it i saw your comment on my wall and i really like your stuff! keep it up please!

Sun, May 3rd, 2009 8:18pm

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