Love is like a vase, the more chips it gets, the less perfect it is.

Love is like...

Love is like a vase, the more chips it gets, the less perfect it is.

A vase is delicate, just like our well being. Many of us have loved and many of us have been loved. Yet love cannot be identified by many.

Love is what bines us to a person, love is many different things; your sister, daughter and wife are all loved by you in many different ways.

Love is not something that can be figured out, its simple, yet complex.

Love is not one day of the year, love is shown in every moment of your life.

Do not undermine love, as it can be cruel and heartless. It often does not last.


Submitted: January 07, 2013

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StephandBrutusandIzzy

This is really good!!

Mon, January 7th, 2013 11:46pm

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thank you, i wasn't too sure about it :)

Mon, January 7th, 2013 11:53pm

Ohioguy

I like it, it's really thoughtful. :)

Tue, January 8th, 2013 6:17pm

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thank you for reading it :)

Tue, January 8th, 2013 10:19am

Jaywrite44

I really like the first line, nice work overall.

Wed, January 9th, 2013 11:49pm

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thank you :)

Thu, January 10th, 2013 7:36am

Wu Lang

i love your definition of love...well done. write more.

Tue, January 15th, 2013 10:35am

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thank you. Means a lot :)

Tue, January 15th, 2013 7:55am

Matthew D. Hay (Tangible Word)

Insightful, beautiful and short, but your point was brilliantly made :D Loved it!

Mon, January 21st, 2013 3:35pm

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Thank you!! really appreciate the comment :D

Mon, January 21st, 2013 7:52am

Moira Garcia

Its really good--- no its really amazing. Its beautiful, and full of meaning :)

Sat, January 26th, 2013 5:54pm

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haha, thank you!! really appreciate you reading it :)

Sun, January 27th, 2013 6:41am

Mikey CD

awesome. i do recommend checking the spelling, but other than that, i like it! =D

Sat, January 26th, 2013 11:48pm

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oh i didn't realise there was any, sorry. Thank you :D

Sun, January 27th, 2013 6:42am

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mintcherryful,

This was a beautiful poem written by you. I loved how you used the first sentence/line of the poem in your summary. To me, it felt inviting and like I wanted to read more, let alone a lovely simile. I like your poety style. It is nice. Thank you for the reading request! May your day be of the most beautiful!

Happy writing/reading! :D
~future author

~*~

My turn...
Could you possibly do me a huge favor and READ EITHER: 1. my SHORT STORY called "ONE BILLION;" 2. the FIRST CHAPTER to my NOVEL called, "THE GUY;" 3. my TWO CONTESTS called, "CHAPTER LINK CONTEST" and "NEW YEAR, NEW CONTEST" along with your PARTICIPATION COMMENT on BOTH hopefully; or 4. SECTION ELEVEN to my PROFILE called "READ A RANDOM STORY GAME?" I hope to see your lovely COMMENT, and possibly your "I LIKED IT" VOTE, underneath any ONE of these pieces, because they both mean the world to me! And, I would be HAPPY to RETURN THE FAVOR to YOU! Thank you so much for your time! And I hope you have the most beautiful day! Happy writing/reading! :D ~future author

Sun, January 27th, 2013 10:08pm

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thank you so much. Your comment was very useful! And i will defiantly read a piece of your writing and leave a comment :D. Thanks again.

Sun, January 27th, 2013 2:42pm

Criss Sole

Very insightful. I liked how you analysed love. I agree with you completely.

Mon, April 15th, 2013 12:58pm

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thank you!

Mon, April 15th, 2013 12:31pm

Raquelita15

You create awesome, visually seen poems. I felt like these descriptions on love were perfect.

Tue, November 19th, 2013 10:44pm

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Wow thank you, means a lot that you read and liked it :) x

Wed, November 20th, 2013 12:36am

Rajesh Gautam

I read your creation, I liked it very much. I am a new member of BOOKSIE with name ‘Rajesh Gautam’ from Agra(The City of Tajmahal), India. I write poems in Hindi language, however for your ease translation in English is also given below the original poem. Please read me and let me know your views about the poem. Your comments bitter or sweet will be a guidance for me. Thanks.

Wed, January 24th, 2018 5:33am

Rajesh Gautam

I read your creation, I liked it very much. I am a new member of BOOKSIE with name ‘Rajesh Gautam’ from Agra(The City of Tajmahal), India. I write poems in Hindi language, however for your ease translation in English is also given below the original poem. Please read me and let me know your views about the poem. Your comments bitter or sweet will be a guidance for me. Thanks.

Wed, January 24th, 2018 5:51am

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