My little Treasure Box.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Love is like a curse
It keeps you twinned to the person
it makes you weak no matter how strong,

My Little Treasure Box.

Love is like a curse
It keeps you twinned to the person
it makes you weak no matter how strong,
I feel for you i really do
But what i can't help noticing is
You feel nothing for me
So loving you is a curse,
I cry, you say stop
I stop, take your pain
And it goes on again
So i say its better
To ignore your requests
My feelings cannot be removed,
I feel you are a treasure
And i treasure you more than anything.
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Submitted: January 15, 2013

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Jaywrite44

Very touching, you cant deny your own feelings....they always find a way to come through.

Wed, January 16th, 2013 9:01pm

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thank you, much appreciated :)

Wed, January 16th, 2013 2:37pm

smircle

It's inevitable to deny your own feelings as they're feelings; there's nothing you can do about it but let them be there. Very well written and I liked it :) Keep writing!

Mon, January 21st, 2013 8:14pm

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haha thank you. Much appreciated

Mon, January 21st, 2013 3:28pm

Criss Sole

Booksie is finally letting me comment, but it’s not back to normal. But at least I have this.
This was a great poem, and I can really relate to what you wrote here.
I have been in love with one person for years now, but to him I am very insignificant. So love can sometimes be a curse for sure.

Sun, April 14th, 2013 11:16am

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Aw finally! and i sure no how you feel, at the time i was inlove with a guy that gave me mixed signals and then stopped contacting me all of a sudden, he never gave me closure so it took way too long to get over him. Thanks for reading!

Sun, April 14th, 2013 4:16am

TRAY

Love is full of emotions. Sad and sweet. indeed sometimes love is a curse.

Sat, February 19th, 2022 7:35am

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