The scares never healed.

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I didn't realise the seagulls flying away. The sea level dropped suddenly. Then i saw it.

The scares never healed.

I didn't realize the seagulls flying away. The sea level dropped suddenly. Then i saw it. My heard stopped. My bottom lip started to tremble. Everyone around me was screaming. I started to whimper silently. I felt like i was dreaming. I had subconsciously removed myself from the situation. Before i knew it, i was in the water. That's when i remembered my little brother. I'd been picked up and dragged into the water. The realization hit me. I was going to die. I saw my brother screaming not far away from me. The wave hit before i could reach him. I tried to scream. I couldn't. i tried swimming. But the wave had its own mind. As the water smacked me around like a helpless doll, objects were hurled at me with such force.

When i awoke. I was floating in the shallow waters. It took me a while to get up. My whole body felt like it had been threw a massive electric blender. When i did manage to get up. I started to panic and scream for my little brother. Where was he. "He'll be fine, he'll be fine, he has to be fine". I kept reassuring myself. Little did i know I'd never see him again.

Submitted: January 16, 2013

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Powerful piece.

Fri, January 18th, 2013 1:59pm


thank you. I was just practicing for my english mono-loge about the war. I'll post that one as well.

Fri, January 18th, 2013 8:30am

Sophie Turner

I like it, but you say things way too early. Where is the suspence?

Thu, January 24th, 2013 7:52pm


thanks for reading. This was just a quick bit of writing.

Fri, January 25th, 2013 7:55am

Criss Sole

This was quite sad. You describe a tragic life changing experience quite well.
In the beginning I think you meant to say your heart stopped, not heard.
This was short but powerful.

Tue, May 28th, 2013 10:17am


Thank you! It was quite short because of the fact it was for an English controlled assessment and I only had a limited amount of time as well all a limited amount of words. Thank you again for giving your feed back and reading ! X

Tue, May 28th, 2013 3:21am

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