You will always be my baby

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

There isnt really a solid rhyme scheme. Just what I feel.

You will always be mine,

whether I am yours or not.

And the times that we've shared will not soon be forgotten.

I swear I could get lost in your eyes,

their deep depts of blue.

But not even that will stop me from finding you.

Who am I to run to,

When my world is shaken and shatters?

Because if it's not you Mandy,

then I really have no clue.

As far as im concerned,

no one else matters.

I see their faces but never their heart.

You have mine,

no matter how far we are apart.


Submitted: December 05, 2008

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jfm98

I decided to check out ya poems...AND THEY R AWSOME!!!
This one was an interesting and fun read! Off to read the next poem! :-)

Fri, December 5th, 2008 11:05pm

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Thnx for reading, and commenting.

Sat, December 6th, 2008 7:14am

Pratibha

voted for it because i really really liked it...good work

Fri, December 5th, 2008 11:41pm

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Well thnx, but just so you know I didnt send out those messages. My girlfriend got onto my account and sent out the messages to make a point that people would like my poems.

Fri, December 5th, 2008 3:48pm

REDWOLF

well hy want to tell you that i think that your poem is very beautiful! and i not saying this to make you feel good this is truth. another thing is that i taked my time to read your profile and it not was a lost of time. However you have great skill to express emotions with words. great work ^_^

Fri, December 5th, 2008 11:46pm

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Thanks for reading and the comment :)

Fri, December 5th, 2008 3:49pm

REDWOLF

"I CLICK THE I LIKE BOTTON"

Fri, December 5th, 2008 11:47pm

Author
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:P Thnx, thats cute lol. Im glad you liked it.

Fri, December 5th, 2008 3:50pm

HellaQueerBaby

That is really good. I love it.

Sat, December 6th, 2008 12:03am

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Thanks.

Fri, December 5th, 2008 4:06pm

Me Against The World

It's very sweet, but that doesn't begin to cover it. Your words peice together so wonderfully. Your point is streched across my mind so far and it's beautiful. I love it.

Lids?

Sat, December 6th, 2008 12:31am

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Thnx a lot, I really dont understand how you all like them so much. Maybe its just that I self degrate myself, but I dont understand it.

Fri, December 5th, 2008 4:40pm

Me Against The World

Well, you see many people have low self-esteem. I can't point fingers because my mother constantly tells me how low of self-esteem I have. I used to have a certain problem and she said doing that to myself lowered my respect to my body and mind. I'm sure there is something in your life that made you the way you are and those things happen and it's hard to take back the past... Another novel comment, sorry. I ramble, it's my worst habit, I can't resist. XD Just know your work has great messages and really speaks to me.

Lids?

Sat, December 6th, 2008 12:47am

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I know, and no dont be sorry lol I like the comments. I think its interesting to hear what other people think about my opinions.

Fri, December 5th, 2008 4:54pm

dreaming of you

what a wonderful poem , i'm green with envy .i wish i'd thought of it .

Sat, December 6th, 2008 12:51am

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:P Sorry, you will get the next one im sure. Thnx for reading.

Fri, December 5th, 2008 4:55pm

Alice Clarence

I really like it. Love is a powerful emotion that you poem shows so well. = )

Sat, December 6th, 2008 12:52am

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Yeah it is very powerful, and unfortunately it can really hurt you if it gets messed up. But hey i guess thats the price you pay.

Fri, December 5th, 2008 4:57pm

Artemis

Excellent work. Sweet and beautiful. Thumbs up.
~Artemis

Sat, December 6th, 2008 2:37am

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Thnx

Fri, December 5th, 2008 6:50pm

Tattoo

Last part was sad =( Goodjob

Sat, December 6th, 2008 2:42am

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Thnx

Fri, December 5th, 2008 6:51pm

AllyDee

This was really good
okay
let me rewrite that
better than good
it was amazing!
Reallyyy loved it
:]]]

Sat, December 6th, 2008 2:48am

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Thnx a lot, im glad you liked it.

Fri, December 5th, 2008 6:52pm

Soapy Tsunami

The start was really cute but it was sad towards the end. I love it X3

Sat, December 6th, 2008 10:00am

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thnx =)

Sat, December 6th, 2008 6:42am

viper

That's a beautiful piece.I hope Mandy liked it.It's romantic and full of love.Hope everything works out.Best of luck.

Sat, December 6th, 2008 12:22pm

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I hope she did too, thnx for reading.

Sat, December 6th, 2008 6:43am

kristal

WoW! This was beautiful!!! I really enjoyed it! That's one lucky girl you got there,lol

Sat, December 6th, 2008 6:08pm

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Lol thnx, but I am the lucky one.

Sat, December 6th, 2008 11:56am

neji chan

That was lovely. Mandy is a lucky lady.

Sat, December 6th, 2008 7:10pm

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Haha, no I am the lucky one. Thnx for reading.

Sat, December 6th, 2008 11:44am

storyofmylife

wow, very nice. =]


[and i read on your profile u like breaking benjamin? they are pretty much the shit. =] ]

Sun, December 7th, 2008 2:55am

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Yeah lol, thnx.

Sat, December 6th, 2008 6:58pm

Chumb

No way dude.
that was so RADD!
hmm. i've being saying Radd way to many times.
Okay another word.
Rephrase, rephrase.
Dude that was so AWESOME!
Neh, Radd is better.
xD

Sun, December 7th, 2008 7:44am

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Haha, I agree.

Sun, December 7th, 2008 6:38am

Nomurcee187

Very well written as a dedication. Check your spelling and try to find more adjectives, more description in your wording. Suggestion: Open your mind and let the words flow through your fingertips--you'll be amazed at what you write.

Sun, December 7th, 2008 9:36am

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Okay, thnx.

Sun, December 7th, 2008 6:39am

Onion Knight

Reminds me of the Linkin Park track 'With You'. Same feel.

I find it funny how your girlfriend asked me to read your work through YOUR profile.

Keep at it dude.

Sun, December 7th, 2008 10:59am

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I guess it is funny, I trust her though.

Sun, December 7th, 2008 6:43am

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