The love in my heart will never depart

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If love is not forver; then its not love................

Though a lot of time has passed, since you are gone

But every spring still reminds me of the walks we took and paths we crossed,

The winter nights remind me of the time we were together by the blazing fire in our hearts.

The summer reminds me of the cool nights we talked And autumn reminds me of you most of all..

because just like the leaves our love has dried in your heart though the leaves fall

But the love in my heart will never depart........

Submitted: July 06, 2012

Memoir love lost sadness disheartned

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Great poem, but I would split it up into lines rather than one big paragraph. This makes them easier to read, and sometime easier to understand.

Fri, July 6th, 2012 11:59am

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Thanks a lot..fr the tip as well I'll definately use it

Fri, July 6th, 2012 5:27am

beautifully composed...!

Fri, July 6th, 2012 12:00pm

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Thnx a lot!!!

Fri, July 6th, 2012 5:31am

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