But A Dream

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Not terribly good, but at least I finally wrote something.
What if everything we know, this life, this world, everything, was just a dream? What if all of us are stuck in this dream land, and someday, we will wake up and our real lives would be completely different?

If life were but a dream,

Than who, pray tell, are we?

Is one of us the dreamer?

Is someone dreaming me?

If life were but a dream,

Than what in here is real?

Is everything imagined?

Do we really feel?

If life were but a dream,

Once dead would we awake?

Would we be much different?

Are we completely fake?

If life were but a dream,

What's a tear and what's a scream?

Are we all dreaming this big world,

If this life is but a dream?

Submitted: April 13, 2010

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an awk hint

this is a very simple poem for a very complex thought. i like your use of questions throughout your poem, because i tend to use the same method in almost all of mine. very nice job.

Tue, April 13th, 2010 7:45pm


Thank you muchly!

Fri, April 16th, 2010 10:40am

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