Leave me to die

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I wrote this upon request of GOTHIKAH66. I was asked to write about my views on life. And though this may not seem like it, that's what it's about. You can't just read it, you have to truly listen if you want to hear the meaning. Unlike most of my other poems this one rhyms, so it might completely fail. Oh well, I tried.

If you can hear me,

Tell me a lie.

If you can see me,

Leave me to die.

If you haven’t a heart

Kick my side.

If you haven’t the courage,

Run and hide.

While you burn me,

Chuckle and laugh.

While you scar me,

Tear my soul in half

While you ignore my pleas,

Spit in my face.

While you turn to leave,

Silence I embrace.

After you’ve finish,

Forget what you did.

After you’ve gone,

My hope you have rid.

After you’ve cut me,

Clean up the mess.

After you’ve killed me,

I can be no less.

I wait for the day,

The day of revenge.

I wait for the night,

The night I avenge.

I wait until you beg,

Beg for forgiveness

I wait until you’ve bleed,

Bleed till your stillness.


Submitted: May 02, 2011

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ItsOnlyAGame

I liked that. You were talking about the world right, not the people in it? And by the way: the rhyming worked. Ha ha.

Mon, May 2nd, 2011 4:35am

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Actually I was talking about the poeple in it. But I try to leave it kind of open for everyone to be able to percive it differently than others. So if there's really no rite or wrong anwer. It did!? I'm glad you think so.!-Ariel

Sun, May 1st, 2011 9:50pm

glitter snow426

so powerfully written, such a cold empty feeling!!! This is simply, SORROW and SADDEST GRIEF, REVENGE POWER ,WELL DONE!!

Mon, May 2nd, 2011 4:22pm

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Exactly! Great job figuring out what I meant! Thank you!-Ariel

Mon, May 2nd, 2011 10:25am

fresh spirits

I liked it very much, but i had a question in mind: have you got your revenge?

Wed, June 1st, 2011 2:17pm

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I'm not a vengful person. I won't give them the satisfaction, I choose not to react in anyway but ignoring. Just like in the poem. I stay silent and that is how it will remain. Thank you for your comment.-Ariel

Wed, June 1st, 2011 11:01pm

Mila

Wow! That's...amazing I should say! Incredible! Luv how it all rhymes!!!Yes, indeed, we could feel the hurt,sorrow and rage...The most disturbing is to ignore someone, like he has never existed.That will probably make him go insane(I suppose so). Cuz when u revenge, u won't feel good after making someone miserable-u know why?cuz he doesn't even deserves anything from u;)Not even revenge))

Wed, September 7th, 2011 10:56pm

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Wow. That was amazing. It sounded very deep. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. You don't know just how much it means to me!-Ariel

Wed, September 7th, 2011 6:41pm

RowanAhmedMahmoud

WOW ITS JUST AMAZING...YOU ARE REALLY TALENTED I REALLY LOVE IT GREAT GREAT GREAT POEM ..

Thu, September 8th, 2011 4:45pm

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Thank you so much. You don't know how much it means to me that you actually liked it. Thank you!-ariel

Thu, September 8th, 2011 3:41pm

ashi17

So deep.... Powerful with perfect rhyming, loved it. Keeps your pen moving :))

Wed, November 14th, 2012 8:43pm

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Thank you. It means a lot.

Mon, January 7th, 2013 4:28pm

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