Poem by: MissFawn
girl, dancer, dance, fan, show, silk, femininity, stripper, lace, feathers, lingerie, ballet, corset, ostrich, burlesque
Submitted: October 29, 2008
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Very very clever, miss fawn.
I enjoy your poetry.
This poem in particular reminded of a picture created by Leonetto Cappiello (italian)...it's title is Cachou Lajaunie ....sort of like a tiny licorice treat.
Your imagery is delicate.
I can never capture iambic pentameter and I applaud your writing.
great way of capturing the scene. wow =)
very cool. burlesque, if only they'd replace stripping with more burlesque shows. i belive the world would be a better place. i really enjoyed how you used iambic pentameter but did not formally rhyme it. clever girl. thanks for the enjoyable read. write on!
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