His scent smelling so sweet
With flawless skin that can never be beat.
He was my love, my breath of fresh air.
Full of desire I follow to meet his kiss
The erotic feeling I cannot miss
He was my love, my breath of pure air.
By the eclispe of my heart, I laugh at his jokes,
His velvet tone of which he always spoke.
He way my love, my breath of sweet air.
His eyes glistened with passionate fire
At which my site could never attire
He was my love, my breath of needing air.
He was as bright as a burning star,
At which he always seem so far.
He was my eternal love, always my breath of fresh air.
But now he was only a memory....
Submitted: February 12, 2008
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good. i liked it.
Lydia_xxxx
Oh, I loved it. It was beatufuly written and flowed very nicely. You did an amazing job. I'm a HUGE Stephenie Meyer fan, so I'll be sure to check out more of your stuff. :)
Thu, March 13th, 2008 4:25am
omg it's beau-tee-full!
Mon, May 19th, 2008 12:55am
amazing. I liked it. keep doing this good work
Tue, June 24th, 2008 6:47am
I liked it a lot!
Sat, July 12th, 2008 7:46pm
I liked your poem alot.
Sat, August 30th, 2008 1:49am
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thank you =]
Sun, August 31st, 2008 12:59pm
It was more than just beautiful.
it was a poem that i would buy just to be able to say that i own it in a sense.
Sidhe
Very Nice
Wed, January 14th, 2009 5:03pm
ah, many can relate with a piece such as this. Job well done. Beautifully written, amazing imagery, good flow and pace. Captured my attention from the first line and held it through the last. I look forward to reading more of your work.
- C. L. Whitfield
Whoa this is amazing!
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almostlonewolf
?Vince? wtfpwnd. Have you played his solo game yet I heard they were releasing one but never actually found out if they did or how good it was? Nice poem btw :p
Wed, February 13th, 2008 5:50amAuthor
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yeah i played his game, its pretty good and is a lot about his (obviously) lol. You should check it out. its called final fantasy: dirge of Cerberus
Tue, February 12th, 2008 10:22pm