He was my Love
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Poem by: MissRachyVengeance
His scent smelling so sweet
With flawless skin that can never be beat.
He was my love, my breath of fresh air.
Full of desire I follow to meet his kiss
The erotic feeling I cannot miss
He was my love, my breath of pure air.
By the eclispe of my heart, I laugh at his jokes,
His velvet tone of which he always spoke.
He way my love, my breath of sweet air.
His eyes glistened with passionate fire
At which my site could never attire
He was my love, my breath of needing air.
He was as bright as a burning star,
At which he always seem so far.
He was my eternal love, always my breath of fresh air.
But now he was only a memory....
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?Vince? wtfpwnd. Have you played his solo game yet I heard they were releasing one but never actually found out if they did or how good it was? Nice poem btw :p
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yeah i played his game, its pretty good and is a lot about his (obviously) lol. You should check it out. its called final fantasy: dirge of Cerberus
good. i liked it.
Lydia_xxxx
Oh, I loved it. It was beatufuly written and flowed very nicely. You did an amazing job. I'm a HUGE Stephenie Meyer fan, so I'll be sure to check out more of your stuff. :)
omg it's beau-tee-full!
Unknown
i like it alot keep up the good work
amazing. I liked it. keep doing this good work
I liked it a lot!
I liked your poem alot.
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thank you =]
Unknown
awesome!
It was more than just beautiful.
it was a poem that i would buy just to be able to say that i own it in a sense.
Sidhe
Very Nice
ah, many can relate with a piece such as this. Job well done. Beautifully written, amazing imagery, good flow and pace. Captured my attention from the first line and held it through the last. I look forward to reading more of your work.
- C. L. Whitfield
Unknown
I really liked this. I read this and I instantly thought of Vampire Academy with Rose and Dimitri. I'm not sure if you've read it, but it's an amazing ongoing series. But then again, it probably reminded me of them because I just read the new book last night and I can't stop thinking about it.
Whoa this is amazing!
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