He was my Love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

A short love poem, simple.



His scent smelling so sweet

With flawless skin that can never be beat.

He was my love, my breath of fresh air.


Full of desire I follow to meet his kiss

The erotic feeling I cannot miss

He was my love, my breath of pure air.


By the eclispe of my heart, I laugh at his jokes,

His velvet tone of which he always spoke.

He way my love, my breath of sweet air.


His eyes glistened with passionate fire

At which my site could never attire

He was my love, my breath of needing air.


He was as bright as a burning star,

At which he always seem so far.

He was my eternal love, always my breath of fresh air.


But now he was only a memory....

Submitted: February 12, 2008

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?Vince? wtfpwnd. Have you played his solo game yet I heard they were releasing one but never actually found out if they did or how good it was? Nice poem btw :p

Wed, February 13th, 2008 5:50am


yeah i played his game, its pretty good and is a lot about his (obviously) lol. You should check it out. its called final fantasy: dirge of Cerberus

Tue, February 12th, 2008 10:22pm


good. i liked it.

Wed, February 20th, 2008 1:18am


Oh, I loved it. It was beatufuly written and flowed very nicely. You did an amazing job. I'm a HUGE Stephenie Meyer fan, so I'll be sure to check out more of your stuff. :)

Thu, March 13th, 2008 4:25am


omg it's beau-tee-full!

Mon, May 19th, 2008 12:55am

Kirsten Rain

amazing. I liked it. keep doing this good work

Tue, June 24th, 2008 6:47am


I liked it a lot!

Sat, July 12th, 2008 7:46pm


I liked your poem alot.

Sat, August 30th, 2008 1:49am


thank you =]

Sun, August 31st, 2008 12:59pm


It was more than just beautiful.
it was a poem that i would buy just to be able to say that i own it in a sense.

Mon, October 27th, 2008 4:00am


Very Nice

Wed, January 14th, 2009 5:03pm


ah, many can relate with a piece such as this. Job well done. Beautifully written, amazing imagery, good flow and pace. Captured my attention from the first line and held it through the last. I look forward to reading more of your work.

- C. L. Whitfield

Fri, February 6th, 2009 3:09am


Whoa this is amazing!

Mon, April 19th, 2010 2:12pm

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