just read..the first ever poem I published here..
This poem is entitled Repulsion and I wrote it because I have Algophobia (the exaggerated fear of pain). And that's why repulsion takes over me.

Repulsion

by: missraine

Time by time I hide

To shadows over aversion

Longing to subside

My hopeless situation


I tried to be blind

And swear not to perceive anymore

I tried to be deaf

And swear not to heed the rumor


I tried numbness

I'm insisting, but does not exist

I still suffer through my weakness

This feeling still persists


I can't fight, but I know I will win

Just to overcome this trepidation

Even it falls on ruin

Just to get over my repulsion


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don't plagiarized! this is my work and have your own!


Submitted: December 30, 2009

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Silver Shadow

it's good. You should definitely write more poems!:)

Sat, January 2nd, 2010 11:19pm

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Well, thanks. I'm glad you like it. I'll keep it up to write for more.. =))

Sat, January 9th, 2010 7:24pm

RayneMarie

Wow... I can feel the power behind your words. I like it :)

Mon, January 18th, 2010 3:57am

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Thank you, I'm very glad you appreciate it.. ^_^ Also thanks for the effort and time on reading it.. have a nice day Rayne!

~???????? missraine08

Mon, January 18th, 2010 3:29am

Catherine Rudderick

beautiful! love the flow, very good word choice. inspiring. keep it up. love it.

-katy:)

Tue, January 19th, 2010 12:03am

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I'm very happy you appreciate it..Though it's my first serious post here and not my featured, some people read it even I don't tell them..btw, thanks for the fan accept..^_^

~???????? missraine08

Tue, January 19th, 2010 5:01am

Booklover9216

Wow that was very well written, it flowed really well. Good job! :D

Fri, February 12th, 2010 5:05pm

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Thanks. I'm glad you appreciated it. =D

Mon, February 15th, 2010 12:03am

PaulChafer

Yes, you can certainly write, better than most on here and as good as those of us who feel we can also write. Never heard of your phobia before - and I know of quite a few - does this include emotional pain? or is just physical? If it is all pain perhaps this explains your lack of self-belief? I think if you post a few more poems like this on here the support you will have will erode your doubts. Well done, it must have taken quite a lot of bravery to post at all knowing your condition: respect!
Paul.

Mon, February 15th, 2010 11:31am

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I left speechless and my mouth still open while reading your comment. Haha! yes, I fear both physical and emotional pains. yeah, it's kinda weird. One of my teacher in highschool noticed that I fear being rejected and it's almost true. And you're right, I also feel discouraged always. So now, I'm taking steps to face and overcome it 'cause it gives so much disadvantages on me.

Thank you so much for commenting here and leaving these words of wisdom. =) You don't have an idea how much you inspired me with your advices.

Another gargantuan thank you for appreciating my poem. ^_^

Tue, February 16th, 2010 5:16am

Mistress of Word Play

You did a wonderful job on the poem. I like your choice of words and the way you created this one. Hard to write about our shortcomings the way you did. A really good write. Giving it an I like it. Susan :)

Thu, February 18th, 2010 4:05am

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I'm grateful that you like it. Thanks for reading though I don't message most of the people here on booksie about my writing. Good thing is, there are people like you that can notice it. A huge thanks also for hitting the I like it button. ^_^

Wed, February 17th, 2010 9:48pm

Graeme Montrose

Great work here, you really opened up your heart, wonderful! Keep it up you can certainly write poetry.

Fri, February 19th, 2010 1:49pm

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Thanks, I'm happy you like it. =)

Sat, February 20th, 2010 6:15am

erstwhile

wow nosebleed tlgako sau lukreng haahha

Sat, April 10th, 2010 4:17pm

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