This is the first poetry I wrote for my boyfriend
I'd like to get feedback from I wrote whether it makes sense or not since I'm not an English native speaker ^^ enjoy

 

Buried me

I've buried it down I'll never forget
Let tear up my deep skin to all secrets
Out of the darkness where light shone by
View my old cliche in veritcal line
Every first letter will tell you mine
Yes, I've loved ,laughed, and cried
Oh, my mind cannot deny it is you
Upon doubts and what makes me blue
Build my hopes in the air I'm a fool
Enough is never enough this is so true
Souls can never be sold til I love you
Though I end up alone at least I do


Submitted: December 27, 2011

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