Faiths Anxiety

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This poem took me about half an hour to write. I was at a friends house with all my friends. One minute i was fine and the next i had the need to get out of there. It always happened but this time the urgency seemed to be close to panic. I left and walked home, it was 2am in the middle of winter and i was freezing. And the words just kept flowing through my mind. When i got home i sat and wrote them out, put them in order and this is what came out of it.

Flashbacks can be a scary thing, especially when you don't want to remember.

She is yet to receive her secret,
Her wishes been left to drown,
From the well of silenced depression,
You're walking on shattered ground.

Be careful of what you pray for,
Be weary of what you seek,
Unexpected flaws in the desired plan,
Feel free to rob the weak.

In the end your time is useless,
From the start its let you down,
The journey from where you are to where you want to go,
Has lead you to what you've found.

Fear leaks through the shadows,
You're covered in deaths regrets,
Nothing you do will stop this,
Forced memories you wont forget.
 


Submitted: May 18, 2011

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Darkie

Yeah I have the word flowing through my mind 2...Sometimes their like voices and they won't leave me alone till I write them...Exceptional poem.U r a fantastic writer and u have urself a new fan and other little orange boxes.Do tell me when u write more because I would totally love to read more of ur work.Cheers!!

Thu, May 19th, 2011 8:53am

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Thanks heaps :D I shall return the favor

Thu, May 19th, 2011 1:59am

Ona Whim

Very nice. The spark of despair is a powerful motivator.

Keep the pen to the paper.

Whim

Thu, May 19th, 2011 7:49pm

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Oh i definitely will... Thanks :D

Thu, May 19th, 2011 5:10pm

HerBeautifulDeath

OOOOh I LOve this :D
Very emotional :D

Fri, May 20th, 2011 2:16pm

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Thanks :D

Fri, May 20th, 2011 6:19pm

Destiny2

Hi there I love the fact that you have taken time out of whatever you are doing to write such excellent poems about your world or your inspiration. The poem titled Sinful Obsession almost brought me to tears because it had so much meaning and I can picture what is going on inside my head and how that happens to some people. Keep up the good work!!!!!!! I love your writing!!!!!!!! :-) I

Mon, May 23rd, 2011 12:59pm

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Wow thank you so much!! Inspiration is a wonderful thing and it comes in many shapes and sizes.
I'm glad that people can appreciate this!! It is my pleasure to supply writings that suit others tastes.

Mon, May 23rd, 2011 6:02am

Silverings

This one really brought me in!!!

Wed, May 25th, 2011 3:57pm

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I'm glad :)

Wed, May 25th, 2011 3:43pm

shika

truly BRILLIANT!!!!I like your style of writing!!!

Thu, May 26th, 2011 5:14am

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Thanks heaps :D

Wed, May 25th, 2011 10:45pm

Brian W

Fantastic poem I think this is my favourite out of what I have read of yours...Greast rhyme and the flow near perfect(one line seemed a bit long) a trivial thing for a great poem...Keep writing

Thu, May 26th, 2011 9:19pm

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Thanks :D

Thu, May 26th, 2011 5:18pm

Elena Tsepesh

brillant poem. I have a hard time deciding on a favorite your poems are very very good. You could give me some pointers. I wish I could write as well as you do mine suck compared to yours.

Fri, May 27th, 2011 4:14am

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Haha thanks, and i just try to find flow, for me it's like writing music. It's how the words go with each other and how to make the phrases stand out better.
I hum while i write, and listen to music that matches the feelings that i want portrayed in the piece.

Thu, May 26th, 2011 9:18pm

A Broken Dream

This is an awesome poem :) I love the rhyme in it, and all the meaning. It really did show me how you felt Great work there!

Fri, May 27th, 2011 9:32pm

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Thanks Heaps :D

Fri, May 27th, 2011 6:50pm

Graeme Montrose

that was an interesting write made me reflect on your words for a while, good structure and rhythm

Sat, May 28th, 2011 7:24am

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Thanks :D

Sat, May 28th, 2011 3:03am

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