Interlude-The Game

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Two people often forget even if they love each other there are problems and issues. If they are strong enough love will survive if not it withers and dies.

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There in the soft radiant candle's fire,
we felt the stir of sweet desire.
Two souls whose hearts had come together,
two lives no power could dare to sever.

Like moths to the flame,
it always ends the same.
A heart is broken,
a word unspoken,
and yet we still play the game.

A gentle stirring of her heart,
the time they had to spend apart.
She thought she read more in his eyes,
but the heart betrays and oft times lies.

Like leaves cast to the wind,
we accept too quickly then rescind.
Dreams are lost,
both souls pay the cost,
and we are left to attack and defend.

Farewell sweet gentle interlude,
I shall not return or try to intrude.
For love it comes and steals the soul,
it cuts the heart and takes its toll.

Like children trying to place the blame,
love always seems to end the same.
Too quick to fall,
we want it all,
and yet we still play the game.


Submitted: October 24, 2009

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angellynn

BEAUTIFUL! What more can I say.

Angellynn:D

Sat, October 24th, 2009 12:21am

Author
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Hi my dear writer friend. Thank you so much. I appreciate it.
Susan

Sat, October 24th, 2009 6:19am

mig

i wonder to who this poem is attributed to?

Sat, October 24th, 2009 10:34am

Author
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Hi Mig, thanks for reading.
Susan

Sat, October 24th, 2009 6:20am

Imuildaeren

beautiful, could you check iut my new poem Sunrays, thanks!

Sat, October 24th, 2009 1:54pm

Author
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Thank you my dear friend for reading and the comment. Of course I would love to read it.
Susan

Sat, October 24th, 2009 7:40am

Timeless Thoughts

Hi my lovely talented wife. What is wrong with that crazy Mig person anyway. She got the hots for you. Tell her you don't swing that way.
Love this write. Nice job.
Gary

Sat, October 24th, 2009 4:08pm

Author
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Just ignore her and her husband have both got some loose screws. They are the ones I told you about. Thanks so much my love.
Susan

Sat, October 24th, 2009 10:21am

TMallory

All words fail me. It's awesomely beautiful

Sat, October 24th, 2009 5:28pm

Author
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Thank you so very much for reading and the comment. Susan

Sat, October 24th, 2009 11:51am

air

Susan this is very well done. Rhythm, rhyme, wording..
Story we all can relate to, you told so well.
~katie

Sat, October 24th, 2009 11:26pm

Author
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Thanks for reading and the comment.
Susan

Sun, October 25th, 2009 9:44am

Felipe Lima

Susan, you did it again! I loved this piece... It's so rhythmic and seductive. When I was reading I imagine a couple playing actually love games in each others, trying not to giving in to the will to hand over and say what they really feel to each other.

It's another amazing piece and I couldn't expect less from you, my dear friend. Keep it up the good work and tell me when you post new stuff.

Kisses
Felipe :]

Sun, October 25th, 2009 7:03pm

Author
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You read the piece well Felipe. I appreciate you reading and saying the nice things you do. You are a true friend.
Susan

Sun, October 25th, 2009 1:28pm

Brian W

I read this poem a couple of times and it is one that I
would ask the author to explain lines and thoughts to me (I am not the sharpest tool in the shed) This flows beautifully as I read it and the rhyme is great. BRian
PS. {hugs} I hope things are going good for you

Tue, October 27th, 2009 10:21pm

Author
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Okay Brian. The poem was a general poem about how people that love each other play silly games. This one gets their feelings hurt and does something stupid and so on. They let the world and others interfer with the love they have for each other. Sometimes people get lucky and find it out early enough to save their marriage, others are not so fortunate.
Does that help? I wrote it because several people that I knew were going through this turmoil in their relationships.
I do thank you for reading and the comments. I guess I am okay. Just tired. Thanks for the hugs. Susan :)

Wed, October 28th, 2009 12:41pm

ZeroG57

Truth be told I only came to see who would give one of the nicest people EVER on booksie trouble. So I figured I might as well read the poem. Great job

Wed, November 4th, 2009 1:45am

Author
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Thanks Abena. He is gone now. I thank God for that too. I was going to close up shop and leave. I appreciate you very much.
Susan

Tue, November 3rd, 2009 5:48pm

ZeroG57

Some guy on youtube tried to have me banned because all over his profile was post this on your profile if you would stick up for Satan. If I knew him I would probably throw a Bible at him.

So anyway I asked if he was a Satanist and he said he was reporting me because apparently I was "persecuting him". But he said he wasn't a Satanist and that he was satanic. This happened a week ago and I'm still on youtube.

Just go to show the people on God's side always win

Wed, November 4th, 2009 10:54pm

Author
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You are so right. His wife kept leaving comments like he and I were messing around. Ha that's a laugh. Then he asked me to remove his and her comments I did that and then his wife he said wasn't his wife started a second round. He asked me to remove the comment where he called me the ugly word and I didn't. I wanted people to know what was going on. Good for you for standing up for yourself and God. He will bless you for it. Thanks you are a dear friend. :)

Wed, November 4th, 2009 4:57pm

James Gueth

Hey, you did it again! You know what, a writer represents the world to us, as it is without fear. And that is what you have done. Love, love, love is something of a game two players can play and it is falling in love with an adult (do teenagers fall in love or is it infatuation?) who grew up apart believing in different things is the most tiring thing. You also have to give and get, but give mostly.

That is what the game is all about. Well I didn't intend to give an opinion but that is what I think this poem is all about, giving and getting, but mostly giving.

I loved it.

Thu, November 5th, 2009 7:19am

Author
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Thanks James, I appreciate it and yes you are 100% right. Susan :)

Thu, November 5th, 2009 12:48pm

danielmiller

An inspired write. Nice job.

Sun, December 6th, 2009 3:29pm

Author
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Thank you my friend it is always a pleasure hearing from you. Susan :)

Sun, December 6th, 2009 11:43am

NazireC

I love this poem, so much and so well woven together. Youve depiced the game really well :)

Mon, December 14th, 2009 7:39pm

Author
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Hi my friend yes love is a game. Roll the dice and place a bet. Silly how people who love each other risk it all with the games they play. Thank you for reading dear Nazire and the comment. Susan :)

Mon, December 14th, 2009 1:15pm

MADNESS IN INK

Great poem. Could call it the Player's Song. M

Wed, December 30th, 2009 11:06pm

Author
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate it. Happy New Year! Susan :)

Thu, December 31st, 2009 9:16am

gloriasands

Well done on this one. Bravo for shedding light on relationships and how they are. Loved it!

Wed, January 13th, 2010 9:04pm

Author
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Thank you Gloria. I see it all the time. Men and women playing those silly stupid games. I appreciate it. Susan :)

Wed, January 13th, 2010 3:59pm

lily of the nile

A gem of a write. Sad but true. Loved this one. Lily

Thu, January 14th, 2010 6:15am

Author
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Hi Lily thank you so much. You are a sweetie. Susan :)

Thu, January 14th, 2010 7:56am

MyraSpears

Loved it! You got this one just right.

Fri, January 22nd, 2010 10:58pm

Author
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Thank you Myra I really appreciate the read and lovely comment. Susan :)

Fri, January 22nd, 2010 8:09pm

momsangel1982

Ah the game of love and how it is played. You did great! Angie :)

Sat, February 20th, 2010 5:01pm

Author
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Thank you Angie! :)

Sat, February 20th, 2010 11:23am

chaddillingham

Love and the games we play. Well written dear friend. Chad

Mon, March 1st, 2010 12:23am

Author
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Hi Chad and thank you. Susan :)

Mon, March 1st, 2010 12:31pm

isabella T

This is such an honest poem. See it a lot in the people around me. Great job!

Wed, March 24th, 2010 3:10pm

Author
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Hi and thank you so much for reading. Susan :)

Wed, March 24th, 2010 8:21am

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