***Passion***

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem of love for my husband Gary. It looks much nicer and has music behind it on my site at PoetryPoem.com just click the link below my picture.

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Passion’s steely grip pulls me into your arms.
Your heartbeat and mine synchronize.
Your tender smile, my delight, cripples, disarms
and I see my life reflected in those eyes.
 
My love divine, precious heart keeper,
save me a place somewhere beyond death.
Drown me in desire, take me deeper.
so I might become your air, your every breath.
 
Time ceases to exist when night shadows appear.
Your gentle touch trails hot ecstasy.
Your patience and trust help disperse each fear.
Let us stay like this till the end of eternity.
 
My love divine, precious heart keeper,
save me a place that I might never lose you.
Drown me in desire, take me deeper,
So we might live on when our life’s are through.


Submitted: April 16, 2010

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snowfallshard

Magnificent write. Went to your site since Booksie has been down and read it there. Love it Susan! Makes me feel good inside. Tanya

Fri, April 16th, 2010 6:14pm

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Hi Tanya and thank you! It is nicer on my other site. The music just makes it better. Susan :)

Sat, April 17th, 2010 8:33am

Charmer1234

If you ever decide to leave your husband let me know. I enjoyed this one. Good show!

Fri, April 16th, 2010 6:42pm

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Hi and thank you so much! I will be here with him till our time comes to leave this earth. I appreciate the offer, but have to pass. Susan :)

Sat, April 17th, 2010 8:29am

isabella T

Oh so pretty and bright. You did great! Loving this one.

Fri, April 16th, 2010 6:52pm

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Hi Isabella and thank you so much. It is how I feel about my soulmate. Susan :)

Sat, April 17th, 2010 8:27am

writing man

A sensual and rather sexy write. Excellent!

Fri, April 16th, 2010 7:54pm

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Thank you so much. I do appreciate it! Susan :)

Sat, April 17th, 2010 8:22am

hollydar

Absolutely beautiful - what a great love you and Gary share. Pat

Fri, April 16th, 2010 8:35pm

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Hi Pat and thank you. He is my world and I hope I am his. Susan :)

Sat, April 17th, 2010 8:18am

chaddillingham

What a treasure he has with you. You two behave yourselves. Great write! Chad

Fri, April 16th, 2010 9:30pm

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Thank you Chad! Susan :)

Sat, April 17th, 2010 8:17am

Timeless Thought

I read it on your other site honey. Thanks baby this was just the best. Just like you! Love ya! Gary

Fri, April 16th, 2010 10:34pm

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Thank you Gary! Love you! You know how it is with me and you. Glad of it too! Susan :)

Sat, April 17th, 2010 8:15am

virginia

Aww great write! So heartfelt(=

Sat, April 17th, 2010 12:33am

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Hi Virginia and thank you. I am so glad you liked it. I am enclosing the link where there is music behind it! Susan :)

http://poetrypoem.com/cgi-bin/index.pl?poemnumber=1033279&sitename=susanmistressofwordplay&password=&poemoffset=0&displaypoem=t&item=poetry

Sat, April 17th, 2010 8:13am

TemperanceJAM

Magnificent poem :)
i love it
~ Temperance :)

Sat, April 17th, 2010 12:55am

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Hi Temperance and thank you. Sorry Booksie locked you out. Susan :)

Sat, April 17th, 2010 8:12am

lily of the nile

A masterpiece my dear friend. Elegant and breathtaking are the words that come to mind. I know Gary loved it. Going to see it on your site. Lily

Sat, April 17th, 2010 7:12pm

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Hi Lily and thank you. It is nicer on my site. Take care. Susan :)

Sat, April 17th, 2010 9:47pm

MADNESS IN INK

As Lily stated breath taking Susan. I will have to visit the link to your site and read it there as well. Loved this very much. M

Sat, April 17th, 2010 11:55pm

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Hi M and thank you. So did you like the music and background I picked. Call me and we'll talk. Susan :)

Sat, April 17th, 2010 9:44pm

danielmiller

Beautiful Susan. I think this is probably your best love poem to Gary other than the Desire one. Excellent write.

Sun, April 18th, 2010 4:12am

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Hi Daniel and thank you. Yep Gary really liked this one. Susan :)

Sat, April 17th, 2010 9:43pm

gloriasands

Precious and beautiful write. You did good!

Sun, April 18th, 2010 7:53pm

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Hi Gloria and thank you so much! Susan :)

Mon, April 19th, 2010 2:54pm

jwb

...
... That's a great poem. Just beautiful! I love it.
... You get my vote too.
...

Mon, April 19th, 2010 2:33am

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Thank you James I do appreciate your vote of confidence. Susan :)

Mon, April 19th, 2010 2:55pm

Chiqui

This is a very beautiful write Susan. Gary is sure a lucky guy. Smiles Chiqui

Mon, April 19th, 2010 11:19am

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Hi Chiqui and thank you. I feel fortunate to have him. You are so sweet! Smiles and Hugs Susan

Mon, April 19th, 2010 2:43pm

MyraSpears

Another wonderful love poem for you husband. You did a beautiful job on this one.

Mon, April 19th, 2010 2:00pm

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Hi Myra and thank you. Susan :)

Mon, April 19th, 2010 1:35pm

Graeme Montrose

Very beautiful and from a lovely heart! Gary is sure lucky!

Mon, April 19th, 2010 2:16pm

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Hi Graeme and thank you. No I am the lucky one. Gary is my soulmate. Susan :)

Mon, April 19th, 2010 1:10pm

momsangel1982

This is just the best. I think you two are so lucky. Angie :)

Mon, April 19th, 2010 5:11pm

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Hi Angie and thank you. :)

Mon, April 19th, 2010 12:58pm

flowerchild

Nice! Very nice!

Tue, April 20th, 2010 10:42pm

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Hi Tommy and thank you! Susan :)

Wed, April 21st, 2010 4:36pm

Rose Wilkinson Clarke

I love this poem, even though I have never really expericenced proper love and have only had one relationship which wasn't exactly great, I feel I can really relate to this.

Peace and Love
Rose
XXX

Thu, May 6th, 2010 2:00pm

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