Twilight She Cries
Poem by: Mistress of Word Play
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Love the way you did this one honey! Different but cool! Gary
Sun, January 17th, 2010 12:31am
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Hi my love. The picture just made this one happen. It started pounding in my head. Glad you liked it. Thank you. Susan :)
Sat, January 16th, 2010 6:34pm
This is very different from what you usually write. I liked it though. It was dark and I love the picture. Jessica :D
Sun, January 17th, 2010 2:12am
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Hi Jessica I actually saw the picture and wrote the poem from what I felt. Thank you for reading and the comment. Susan :)
Sat, January 16th, 2010 6:15pm
Short but full. (lower lip quivers in empathy)
At first I saw the "Twilight" word and almost dove under the couch. Then I realized that it was you, so I plodded ahead. Glad I did.
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Hi my friend and thank you. I am not a Twilight fan by any means, but it has its merits. At least people are reading again. I saw the picture and the poem came. Sort of a grim thing but it is part of me. I thought someone might like it.
I appreciate it so much. Susan :)
It is a beautiful poem in spite of the picture. Love the structure very strange. Nice job. Lily
Sun, January 17th, 2010 1:54pm
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Hi Lily I wrote it like it came. I sort of an odd thing no rhyme on the first line rhyme on second and third lines. Freaky. Well thank you I appreciate it. Susan :)
Sun, January 17th, 2010 12:55pm
Love this poem Susan. :)
Sun, January 17th, 2010 2:31pm
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Hi Imuil I saw the picture and boom there it came falling on me like a stack of newspapers. Glad you liked it and thank you. Susan :)
Sun, January 17th, 2010 12:53pm
Different, appears to have vampiric allusions, short and sweet as you say, but saying all that needs to be said.
Paul.
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Hi Paul I saw the picture and this is what came from it. No changes just those words. Guess I'll never know why. Thank you though for reading. Susan :)
Sun, January 17th, 2010 11:52am
May be short but full of meaning. Very Nice My Friend. As all your work is so amazing to me. Loved it!
Angellynn:D
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Thank you Angellynn. I really appreciate it so much. Susan :)
Mon, January 18th, 2010 6:33am
Lovely:)
Mon, January 18th, 2010 12:02pm
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Hi my friend and thank you. I hope your leg heals quickly. Sorry for the pain. Susan :)
Mon, January 18th, 2010 6:31am
I liked this one. I can see how the picture inspired the write. Amazing so few words and the structure you used to make this the way it is. Excellent write.
Mon, January 18th, 2010 4:56pm
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Thank you Daniel I really appreciate it. I wrote what came and did nothing else. Glad you liked it. Susan :)
Mon, January 18th, 2010 10:26am
The picture, and the poem are perfect for each other!
I thought it sounded Vampiric too!
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Hi Kelley it struck me as odd that the picture actually inspired the poem. I wrote it just as it came. Thank you so much. Susan :)
Mon, January 18th, 2010 11:44am
I loved it! Impressive rhythm scheme. So few words and they tell the picture's story. Great job! M
Mon, January 18th, 2010 9:41pm
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Thank you M. I appreciate it. I always love hearing from you. Susan :)
Mon, January 18th, 2010 3:51pm
A very sad and short poem but one with meaning. I associate this poem with my wife at the moment
Tue, January 19th, 2010 5:59am
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Hi Brian and thank you. I hope you have news and soon. Let it be good news for all of you that love her. Take care and {hug} your wife for me. I have a {hug} for you as well. Susan :)
Mon, January 18th, 2010 10:01pm
A short but well written piece.
Tue, January 19th, 2010 4:24pm
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Hi Shea and thank you. I am blaming this one on the picture and the moon. Susan :)
Tue, January 19th, 2010 8:27am
Wow! this is real dark chills down me spine here. well written susan. Smiles Chiqui
Tue, January 19th, 2010 8:22pm
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Hi Chiqui I saw that horrible picture and as some of the things I write do this came out. I thank you my friend. Susan :)
Tue, January 19th, 2010 2:38pm
I like the rhyming scheme on this one. You did great. The poem really matches the picture. I like the picture and love the poem.
Wed, January 20th, 2010 9:56pm
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Thank you Gloria! I am so glad you liked it. Susan :)
Wed, January 20th, 2010 5:40pm
Gorgeous write. Interesting rhyming scheme. Never seen it before. Great job woman. Chad
Thu, January 28th, 2010 5:19am
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Thank you Chad! It's a secret don't tell. Susan :)
Wed, January 27th, 2010 10:37pm
hehe I enjoyed this. Short, concise and quite alluring I might add.
Just beneath the surface, something is lurking to come out, alluding to it, but never really knowing what it is!
Wonderful dear Susan, just wonderful.
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Thank you Nazire. What you see came just as it is. The picture made me do it. That is my story and I am sticking with it. Susan :)
Fri, January 29th, 2010 8:31pm
Great write it leaves the reader to draw their own conclusions. Loved the picture but those few words you used were just amazing. Angie :)
Mon, February 1st, 2010 3:58pm
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Hi Angie! Thanks my dear I appreciate it.
Mon, February 1st, 2010 8:05am
Excellent write and a stunning picture.
Wed, February 10th, 2010 10:10pm
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Thank you so very much. I appreciate it! Susan :)
Thu, February 11th, 2010 6:24amFacebook Comments
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Strange construction. A magnificent piece. Loved it!
Sat, January 16th, 2010 10:15pmAuthor
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Hi Myra if it exists I don't know what the structure of the poem is called. I wrote it like it came after seeing the picture. Really odd. Thank you my friend. Susan :)
Sat, January 16th, 2010 6:35pm