A Million Broken Hearts

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Have you ever been broken hearted? If yes, well, I'm with you.

Broken Hearts

May I tell you? May I tell you not?

I'm broken hearted, and that's a fact.

You left me weeping and crying day and night,

Sorry for my reaction, but you were out of my sight!

I hope you know I'm broken hearted,

But I know, it brings you hatred.

How are you?

How was your day?

Do you care to listen to what I say?

Nevermind, I'll go my own way.

Submitted: November 19, 2010

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Balderdash! =)

Fri, November 19th, 2010 3:18am


I actually liked the title and the first two lines that go with it, but unfortunately, I think that you didn't quite manage your time in writing this one. It may be fine, but it could be made finest.

Fri, November 19th, 2010 3:56am


Yeah, I agree, it is a little short. Well, I just wanted to make a poem using the topic you suggested to me.

Thu, November 18th, 2010 8:54pm

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