Broken Hearts
May I tell you? May I tell you not?
I'm broken hearted, and that's a fact.
You left me weeping and crying day and night,
Sorry for my reaction, but you were out of my sight!
I hope you know I'm broken hearted,
But I know, it brings you hatred.
How are you?
How was your day?
Do you care to listen to what I say?
Nevermind, I'll go my own way.
Submitted: November 19, 2010
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I actually liked the title and the first two lines that go with it, but unfortunately, I think that you didn't quite manage your time in writing this one. It may be fine, but it could be made finest.
Fri, November 19th, 2010 3:56am
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Yeah, I agree, it is a little short. Well, I just wanted to make a poem using the topic you suggested to me.
Thu, November 18th, 2010 8:54pmFacebook Comments
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Balderdash! =)
Fri, November 19th, 2010 3:18am