I Remember Those Days

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

For all those whose hearts are broken...

I Remember...

I remember the day, the day we were together,

Hoping this relationship would truly last forever.

I remember the day you held my hand,

No commotions, no commands.

I remember the day, the day you broke my heart,

Everything was wrong, for one year we were apart.

I remember the day I was thinking of you while walking on this everlasting track,

Oh, forget this! When will you ever come back?

Submitted: November 06, 2010

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Aw...I relished reading this one. It's kind of short, but cliffhangers usually do the trick. They give the readers more chances to bring themselves into everlasting conclusions that could utterly change their lives due to their perspectives of them.

Great work. Keep it up! And if you have more works in mind, never neglect to keep me updated. =)

Sat, November 13th, 2010 1:18am


I agree :)
Sure, I'll update you.

Fri, November 12th, 2010 5:22pm

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