I Tried, Haven't I?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Aren't you just tired of trying?

I Tried

I tried to secure you

I tried to admire you

I tried to let you,

My friend, I love you so!

I tried to be silent

I tried to be content

I tried to fight the tears,

but my feelings can't vanish.

I tried to look so strong

So the friendship can last long

I tried to convince myself

That loving you is SIMPLY WRONG...

Submitted: November 13, 2010

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Sorry, guys! It's, "I tried to let you know".
TYPO. =)

Sat, November 13th, 2010 9:44pm


That's how I felt with my friend not so long ago. I got over him and now I'm asking myself what I saw in him... Good poem, I like the way you said the feelings to make it seem like the person is .... anxious(?). I don't know the right word to describe this, but I love it!

Sun, November 14th, 2010 2:42pm


I've been through a lot of these situations. Haha. Anyways, thanks for reading! =)

Mon, November 15th, 2010 11:55am


You did, didn't you?

Mon, November 15th, 2010 8:17am


I guess so...;)

Mon, November 15th, 2010 11:56am

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