Love In My Words

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

An acrostic rhyming poem

LUST

ON THE TOP OF MY LIST

VEIL OF MINE

ETERNAL BLISS

LOST

OVER YOU? I WISH

VOWS OF NO TRUTH

EMPTY PROMISES........


Submitted: March 20, 2010

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Cullen24Bryant

I like how there was so much depth to this poem with only few words...very good!

Sat, March 20th, 2010 5:50pm

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Thank you very much!

Sat, March 20th, 2010 1:50pm

XxShadowxRosexFauxexX

Wow that is very deep and I absolutely love it im working on the 2nd chappy 4 Broken Music box right now! ill tell u when im finnished good work :) ~Fauxe

Sun, March 21st, 2010 1:26am

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Thnx! That means alot from u because I love your writing and u commented my poem:) Thnx 4 keeping posted!

Sat, March 20th, 2010 6:31pm

Teiani

hey i really like this poem its so grasping yet simple and deep but without going on forever.............great job........love it (:

Wed, March 24th, 2010 7:12am

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Thnx so much:)

Wed, March 24th, 2010 6:15am

xxNOxNAMExNINJAxx

i love how you highlighted it! it was my favorite part X). the poem was short and awesome!!! i rembered what an acrostic poem was now! paha this was good.

Thu, March 25th, 2010 9:56pm

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Thnx:)

Thu, March 25th, 2010 2:59pm

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