What we have

Poem by: Molly Sohn McDonel

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I wrote this about a relationship.

What we have is magical

Without you i'd be hysterical

it used to be theroretical

I used to speak hypothetical

Fear of losing you is irrational

Together forever is most probable

Need someone reliable

Submitted: January 04, 2010

Romance

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Kimika

I liked your end rhyme. :) And the poem in general. Good job.

Mon, January 4th, 2010 10:58pm

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Thank you I am rather new at this.

Mon, January 4th, 2010 5:21pm

HeartDream

Wow, I really liked it, especially the rhyming.

~HeartDream

Mon, January 4th, 2010 11:01pm

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Thank you I wasn't really aiming to rhym I was just trying to put big words in it.

Mon, January 4th, 2010 5:19pm

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