Angels and Demons Warfare
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Book by: mommy3
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Submitted: September 26, 2009
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Recent Comments
This is amazing i want more pwweezz :)
Please keeep me updated
~ Adelaide DeWitt
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Sure I am sort of in the process of rewriting this novel. It needs some work done. I will let you know when more is posted. Jessica :D
Grate I LOVE IT :)
Your descriptions and imagintation is amzing :)
oN TO READ MORE
~ Adelaide DeWitt
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You are so nice. Thank you so much for all your comments. Jessica :D
ooh amazing still
you are an amazing writer :)
i am loving this novel so far
~ Adelaide DeWitt
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Thank you. I am glad you are enjoying this novel. Jessica :D
wow another grate chapter :)
amazing descriptions :)
on to read more
~ Adelaide DeWitt
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Thank you so much. Jessica :D
what a grate chapter
the descriptions are grate :)
the chapter all flowed together like (Hope Lund) has said
I am enjoying this novel :)
On to read more
~ Adelaide DeWitt
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Thank you. I am glad you are enjoying this novel. Jessica :D
An Amazing Prolouge
on to read more :)
~ Adelaide DeWitt
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Thanks Jessica :D
I think you did a very good job - I don't really understand why you got some negative comments, unless you've edited it since.
I enjoyed reading - it flowed nicely.
The descriptions, dialogue and storyline is brilliant!
I'll read more as soon as I can. :)
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Yes I did reedit this story. Still working on it. Thank you so much really appreciate it. thanks for reading and commenting. Jessica :)
I really like it - short but very good. :)
Interesting, I'm going to read the next chapter.
I clicked 'i like' too. ;)
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thank you. I am glad you like this. Jessica :)
This looks really good! Nice job. Susan :)
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Thank you. Still working on it though. Glad you liked it. Jessica :)
Nice job my friend! Love it. Wish I could click I like it again. Susan :)
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Thank you. Jessica :)
I love the start...More please. I must ask...where do you get these awesome pictures that you use? They are great!
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Um I usually google the pictures and get them from devianart.com or another website. I am glad you love the beginning of the story. thanks for reading and commenting Jessica :)
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Although i have found this a compelling read perhaps there is need of more dialogue i guess this can enhance a story but the description of the chapters are well written and there is much diversification of script and characters,i can't really complain as in my stories i tend to focus on plots rather than strong characters.
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I know I am working on it with someone to reedit and rewrite so it sounds better. I will do this later once all my challenges are complete. thanks for letting me know. Jessica :)
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These chapters are just so full of imaginative detail and exciting plots with excellent characters,i can't take my eyes of this story am looking forward to the next chapter.
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Oh thank you so much. I will be updating this real soon once it is rewritten it still needs some work thanks for reading and commenting. Jessica :)
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I loved the dramatic twists which are unfolding here you seem to have come on leaps and bounds with every chapter,keep up the great work.Now to the next chapter.
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Thanks I am glad you are enjoying. My imagination sometimes gets the best of me. Still needs some work though. Jessica :)
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A wonderfully scripted chapter which just gets better and better,i like your ironic twists and aggressive dialogue this enhances the story.
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Thank you I am so glad you enjoyed. I will be rewriting this very soon. Only about 4 more challenges to do. No more after that and will start rewriting this. Jessica :)
Hi Jessica. I hope you add more to this. If you do and I don't come to read give me a shout. Love this story. Have a good day. Susan :)
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Yes I will add more Susan I am in the process of rewriting this novel. Needs some work and then I will continue you some more. Thanks for asking Jessica :)
Unknown
This was a real eye opener the graphic scenes of sex and the fast way the evil fiends had their wicked way and then systematically dispensed with their victims was a little sudden.I enjoyed reading it for the greater part perhaps a little dialogue between the victims and screaming might make it more authentic,i mean i wouldn't be turning the air blue if this was happening to me.
I am looking forward to the next chapter with great anticipation though.
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yeah. I know what you mean. I am going to rewrite this novel soon. I need to finish my challenges first. then start rewriting because I am literally stuck as in writer's block. Thanks for commenting and reading. Jessica :)
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Another enjoyable chapter with vivid and imaginative scenes with a truly amazing plot which adds colour to the story,I loved the dialogue and this story has enormous potential.On to the next chapter
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Oh thank you so much. I am really glad you enjoyed this story. I am working on rewriting a little bit of it though. Jessica :)
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A wonderful start with this short prologue very descriptive and sets the scene beautifully for the oncoming battles,who will win the conquests and how will it shape the story very interesting take on Angel and Demons.
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Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed. Jessica :)
Yes, the comments above say it all really. I will mail you.
relax, no worries.
Paul.
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Okay thanks :)
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