Poem by: mommy3
death, poem, sadness, madness
Submitted: December 26, 2009
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That is so sad, awww i feel so bad for that girl.very touching, loved it much! ~KeRi
Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed reading the poem. Hope you had a great Christmas. :D
great poem :) good luck
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Such a sad poem. It seems to ring with melancholy and that feeling that she can't escape, which traditionally is associated with destiny. Great entry here :) Good luck in the challenge!
Oh, and happy holidays!
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Whoa, this is intense, and so sad :( Poor woman. Love it though, and the picture! Very nice!
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Love it!! The feeling, the passion, everything. It has a nice flow but I still feel very sorry for the girl. I don't know why but I have a feeling that she loves him and that makes it just twice as sad...Just my opinion though!! Hope you had a nice Christmas and that Santa brought you lots of gifts!!
Yes she does love him but he does not love her. It is a sad situation she is in. I ma glad you loved it. :D
The rhyming scheme is not the best I have ever seen, but it is superior to many on here. Your words certainly convey a vivid imagery of what is happening in the picture and leave us with sadness for the careless loss of life when she did not appear to do anything wrong. Not an easy picture to write for, but well done for giving it your all.
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Sad but great. Pressing the i like vote for a great entry. I wish you the best of luck in this challenge.
Thank you so much. :D
Complies with the picture very well. The rhyming is well done, and the story line fits perfectly. Good Luck!
Thank you. I appreciate your comment. Good luck with your entry as well. :D
Mistress of Word Play
Really powerful write. Think it fits the picture well. Like the words and strong emotions you used. Well done! Good luck in the challenge my friend. Susan :)
Thank you. Glad you liked it. This one was a little hard to do considering the picture.
This poem had a nice flow and rhythum to it though i was a little confused to it's meaning,i was somewhat saddened by the eventual demise of this black rose who sits so unusually on the edge of the ocean.
A chilling and very atmospheric write well done.
Thanks. The picture was really giving me a hard time. I tried the best I could do with the poem.
Very good poem. The picture was kinda hard to write about, but you did a great job.
This was a very sad poem, but I enjoyed it.
I dislike how some people humiliate themselves for others just to get broken. I think you made that very clear here...
Thank you. I am glad you liked this poem. Yes this was a lot harder with the picture. Jessica :D
This is awesome. I really enjoyed this. It was meaningful and it teaches us that we can't expect too much from life. The words were apt to describe the picture. You've got loads of talent. :)
Thank you. I am glad you like this. Jessica :)
Interesting. I think this is your best so far I have read by you.
I am not crazy about your rhyming scheme, but it's not bad at all.
Susan's and a few to mention their rhyming scheme spoils me. I cannot rhyme for the life of me. I stick to blank verse haha. I am too much of a chicken.
This was a bit confusing and could be tidied up but well written and powerful. Definitely emotive!
Thank you. Yes this was a little difficult to come up since I had to base it on the picture. I really had to think of something and then it finally came to me. Thanks for commenting and reading. Jessica :)
Wow! that was fantastic! I love it! It was sad. And I can't imagine myself writing that. I rhink it takes a certain kind of person to write stuff like that, and you are definitely that kind of person!
Oh thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the compliment too. Jessica :)
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