I Want, I Hope

Poem by: Monishere

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just how i feel

I come to you

With all that I am

No pretence

No games

Honest

True

I give you my heart

It is all yours

You have given me yours

And oh how I wish to be whole

How I wish it was enough

The ache

The pain

Of a past that won’t go away

A need

A desire

Something that I crave

Your love it helps me

To ease the hurt and the pain

It makes the past less important

But oh how it’s still there

It won’t go away

How I wish it would

How I look up to the Heavens

Seeking God for a reprieve

That it will no longer hurt

That you can be all that I need

Submitted: March 03, 2011

Poetry love hope trust

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Gadzookziie Spice 99

the emotion in this is really powerful... i love the way you have wirtten this :]

Fri, March 4th, 2011 8:36am

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thank u so very much i truly appreciate that

Fri, March 4th, 2011 3:14am

Gadzookziie Spice 99

i thought i'd re-read. i still like it :] and i'll tell you here (booksie is having a spaz with the commenting on the pages) that I updated Promises Whispered if your interested :]

Fri, March 25th, 2011 10:25am

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thank u so ver much for that i actually find story very good and interesting so far! i also hav a new story and if u could read it and give me ur thots on it i would truly appreciate it. its called Heaven... i think i may change that title before its all over with though...

Sat, March 26th, 2011 6:20am