I Want, I Hope

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

just how i feel

I come to you
With all that I am
No pretence
No games
I give you my heart
It is all yours
You have given me yours
And oh how I wish to be whole
How I wish it was enough
The ache
The pain
Of a past that won’t go away
A need
A desire
Something that I crave
Your love it helps me
To ease the hurt and the pain
It makes the past less important
But oh how it’s still there
It won’t go away
How I wish it would
How I look up to the Heavens
Seeking God for a reprieve
That it will no longer hurt
That you can be all that I need

Submitted: March 03, 2011

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Gadzookziie Spice 99

the emotion in this is really powerful... i love the way you have wirtten this :]

Fri, March 4th, 2011 8:36am


thank u so very much i truly appreciate that

Fri, March 4th, 2011 3:14am

Gadzookziie Spice 99

i thought i'd re-read. i still like it :] and i'll tell you here (booksie is having a spaz with the commenting on the pages) that I updated Promises Whispered if your interested :]

Fri, March 25th, 2011 10:25am


thank u so ver much for that i actually find story very good and interesting so far! i also hav a new story and if u could read it and give me ur thots on it i would truly appreciate it. its called Heaven... i think i may change that title before its all over with though...

Sat, March 26th, 2011 6:20am

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