Peace Hunter

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

it was about my parents fighting so i expresed my feelings by writing a poem about peace and it made it to the peace poetry contest

Peace Hunter

By: Dorissa Murch

The Peace Hunter

Searches For Peace.

He Loves helping

When There's No

Peace, And When

He's Gone, The

Peace Is Gone.

Just Like Me.

When I'm There

They Stop Fighting

And When I'm

Gone They Fight

Because I Am

THE PEACE HUNTER

..................................


Submitted: April 21, 2012

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Murnit

Hi Dorissa, you wrote a very emotional and moving piece. It must be hard sometimes to be the peace hunter? Im very sure they do love you to bits and you seem like a very special and talented young lady....Keep writing!! Mx

Sat, May 5th, 2012 12:41pm

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Thank you:))))))))

Sat, June 16th, 2012 4:31pm

Stormbird Throneshaker

Another super hero "The Peace Hunter" we need you!
Someone's mother (should I say who?) sent me here to search you out and they were right about (should I say who?) The Peace Hunter? No, you writing about the Peace Hunter!
Amazingly awesome and super hero sensational!
It gets a vote from me and I wasn't forced in to it!

Sun, January 27th, 2013 4:20pm

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lol thanks for the feedback, and thanks for the vote of approval:)

Sun, January 27th, 2013 12:39pm

Augustine

Great poem!! Sounds like a tough job being the 'Peace Hunter'. You have a great talent! My advice to you is to keep writing. It is the most constructive way of ridding yourself of bottled-up emotion. Also, it helps others to know they are not alone out there in their own personal struggles. Good job! Looking forward to reading more of your lovely thoughts. :)

Sun, January 27th, 2013 6:40pm

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Thanks for the amazing comment, they make my day so much better. Also thanks for feedback, it helps me know what i need to change in order to become a better writer.

Sun, January 27th, 2013 12:33pm

gummybears

good peom

Sun, January 27th, 2013 8:54pm

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duhhhh lol hahaha it got me honorable mention at the peace poetry contest...lol allison you are a silly kitty

Sun, January 27th, 2013 6:01pm

ashi17

Very touching poem, keep writing and expressing yourself, take care :))

Mon, January 28th, 2013 5:59am

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I will keep writing and i always express my self through my clothes, art, and writing. Thanks For The Feedback:)

Mon, January 28th, 2013 1:52pm

Irish wolf hound

This is a poem I can half relate to. It is spoken from your heart as most of your other poems are. Keep it up, and please update me when you next have a new poem!

Mon, January 28th, 2013 6:09am

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Thanks fot the feedback, i really try hard to get my poems just right so it makes me happy when people like and comment on my work:)

Mon, January 28th, 2013 1:46pm

skyrimlover

I love that poem Moondemention and i know that you worked so hard on it and expressed your true feelings in it.

Fri, August 8th, 2014 8:03pm

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