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Submitted: March 12, 2012
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Very different style for you but still funny as heck. This sets an interesting mood. Like it a lot! :)
Tue, March 13th, 2012 3:15pmWonderfully written very interesting and insightful
The descriptions were specific and I liked how you portrayed her personality in the beginning of the poem. The whole lay out of your poetry was great from the beginning to end part of it and was excellent and especially well written. The tempo and drive of the poem excited me and wanted me to never to end my reading of it but yet it will be another story that you shall write
Wonderful piece of writing. I enjoyed it tremendously.
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My homework report:
Mon, March 12th, 2012 11:49pm* a grin at '13th and pelvis'
* a throaty guffaw your 2nd, 'burst into tears'
* a choke and hawhawhaw at'telly keneisses'
* repeating over and over between laughs-- 'bil tupp,' 'howie dewen,' 'gladys sunday,' and 'molly silvia labbick'--that last almost doing me in...
So ---
Kudos, man of many voices. You've done it again.
My very best regards
Connie
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glad you enjoyed....that was fun
Mon, March 12th, 2012 10:51pm