CHOCOLATE PROMISES

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

trust

your words of trust sustain me

and the ones that i love best
are rich and sweet
so good to eat
they leave you feeling blessed
just melting in your heart
with such a fascinating flavor
i need your chocolate promises
don't need vanilla wafers
 
its easy to tell falsehoods
but recalling them is hard
you pile up lies
and trusting dies
when one puts up their guard
the words that leave your lips
should have a taste that one can savor
i want your chocolate promises
don't want vanilla wafers
 
when you are in a union
there's a bond that draws you near
and closer yet
when there's a threat
of storms that may appear
the power of that bond
will make the atmosphere much safer
i love your chocolate promises
don't love vanilla wafers


Submitted: April 09, 2012

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californiadreamin

Wonderfully mouthwatering piece. This is so full of truth while still being whimsical and fun. You really are the master of this, Moonphish! :)

Mon, April 9th, 2012 3:32am

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my muse came up with chocolate promises...i came up with vanilla wafers

Sun, April 8th, 2012 8:52pm

Wilbur

(and no jellybeans) -- love is blooming in your poems. lovely to hear in my head. many happily ever afters, connie

Mon, April 9th, 2012 7:52pm

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lol....exactly....jelly beans are great on their own

Mon, April 9th, 2012 8:52pm

Insane Membrane

oh god so romantic and just when i was feeling sick from choclate eggs ... a lovely write tho not to my taste as you know

Tue, April 10th, 2012 8:57am

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i used to be soooooo disappointed when those chocolate bunnies turned out to be hollow

Tue, April 10th, 2012 8:13am

Insane Membrane

well ok I do like chocolate ... and your poem

Tue, April 10th, 2012 9:00am

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and i like eggs....if they have lots of pepper....but i won't eat rabbit

Tue, April 10th, 2012 8:14am

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