now, if you're canis major
aquarius wants water
gemini wants doubles
hercules insists
phoenix hits the floor
so if you like celebrities
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brilliant, very good work!
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thanks somuch :) - alvin
Bravo!This is so clever.
It's full of gems(was going to include one,but there are so many.)
A tour de force,alvin,I'll read this over and over.
Dee:)-
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thanks Dee...you are such a faithful reader, i love that :) - alvin
The wordplay is so magnificent e_e I can't help but to read it again, lol Wonderfully written
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i kinda hate capitalizing...this was fun to write...thanks for romping around in my garden a while :) - alvin
Nicely done Alvin, see you are back on form :)
Dibs
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thanks Dibs...glad you enjoyed :) - alvin
you didn't mention leos, oh well it was still a good poem .
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yes, i forgot leos...sorry - alvin
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