DYSLEXIC VALENTINE

Poem by: moonphish

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happy valentine's day

i baunt to wee yer tallenvine

you wean the merled too me

yer sutch a duty, barling

yer the homely sun i wee

and yes, i no gum smother whirls

nut bun pumcare too you

so met lee bee yer tallenvine

and drake my meams tum crew

Submitted: February 14, 2012

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makatosh

Are you really dislexic? If not this can be taken a little offensively because this is a real problem in some kids.

Tue, February 14th, 2012 6:10pm

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i am not dyslexic.....and i mean no disrespect...its just wordplay

Tue, February 14th, 2012 11:09am

Wilbur

Oh for heavens sake! And I'm just glad you've raised your head again. I worried you wuz sick. And mebbe you are, in a kind of compulsively wonderful way.
This is so - mad and weird and moonphish. Made my head hurt but in a good way. Happy Valentine's Day to you and may you live and be well. Connie

Tue, February 14th, 2012 8:28pm

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thanks so much connie....just been working a lot of hours lately....i intend of doing a lot of writing this week....thanks for missing me

Tue, February 14th, 2012 1:11pm

Wilbur

And WHERE did you get that picture!?!! C/W

Tue, February 14th, 2012 8:29pm

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that's my REAL ear....hence the hat

Tue, February 14th, 2012 1:09pm

Fannie

I was kind of freaked out over the picture too, but...
gee, this poem gave me a headache. Although, I do enjoy you r wordplay. This reminds me of when I was younger, I would write my entire name backwards- pretty weird, huh? But then I would always look at my paper in the mirror... interesting for a preschooler, huh?
Unfortunately, I can't do that anymore...
:(

Tue, February 14th, 2012 10:24pm

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that is very cool....thanks for reading :)

Tue, February 14th, 2012 2:27pm