Poem by: moonphish
Submitted: January 05, 2012
you are my none shine
and i can live without you
you incomplete me
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Very good, and amusing. Too many haiku these days don't even bother with the 5-7-5 syllable structure, so it is good to see an adherence to tradition. I love 'none shine', and hope the subject of this poem receives a copy.
i don't hate anyone....just a poem :)
You are a clever and funny man. Good one!
thanks bob :)
I love this. You are a smart cookie!;)
thanks cali :)
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