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the regiment descends on the target

BASE : come in commander chelidon

CHELIDON : roger...this is petro
BASE : what is your position ?
CHELIDON : off the coast
BASE : latitude reading ?
CHELIDON : 33 o 30 ' 6 " N
BASE : longitude ?
CHELIDON : 117 o 39 ' 42 " W
BASE : confirmed...on target
CHELIDON : we have pushed the envelope since argentina
BASE : we appreciate your determination in this matter...i cannot overemphasize the importance of this mission
CHELIDON : pucker factor at high levels with all personnel
BASE : keep your head on a swivel
CHELIDON : roger that....not gonna lose the bubble
BASE : visibility ?
CHELIDON : cloud cover....flying blind...we'll flat hat if needed
BASE : throttle back and descend to 200 cherubs
CHELIDON : roger, descending....got a visual...sacellum is in sight
BASE : ease it down
CHELIDON : regiment has landed.....over and out
SAN JUAN CAPISTRANO- MARCH 19. 2012...As expected, a vast flock of swallows descended on the mission In San Juan Capistrano today delighting the throngs gathered for the festival

Submitted: March 19, 2012

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You are too funny! I love it!!

Send me some of what you are taking!

I love it!

Mon, March 19th, 2012 8:12pm


its called oxygen....my muse came up with the concept....she has some wonderful ideas for me

Mon, March 19th, 2012 1:21pm


You are too funny - and hot damn, I just looked up and saw that's exactly what attanasio commented. Well, truth in numbers! Love it
Many regards, Connie

Tue, March 20th, 2012 11:24pm


thanks Connie...my muse said "how about this for a funny idea ?" and i took it from there

Tue, March 20th, 2012 5:16pm


You and your muse sure have crazy minds! This is wonderfully executed. I so love your style. Another home run. :)

Wed, March 21st, 2012 3:29pm


i mentioned swallows to my muse and she came up with the idea....she is a huge part of my writing when we brainstorm together....thanks cali :)

Wed, March 21st, 2012 9:00am

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