the child inside came forth and cried
Submitted: December 06, 2011
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thanks brucek.....yeah, i have a backlog and my muse has kicked into high gear lately....feel free to spread....that is very kind of you
Thu, December 8th, 2011 7:51pmYou rock, bro!
Sat, December 10th, 2011 1:12pmReblogged it on my site! -> ralphiesportal.me
Sat, December 10th, 2011 1:15pmYou are one funny guy! Love love love this one! ;)
Sun, December 18th, 2011 7:00amLol good fun!
I've read in books that there were other children/siblings to Jesus.. not in the bible of course,.. and I recall a girl as well.
Hahahaha!
This one made me chuckle.
Clever and funny!
What a combination.
Dee.
I really love your creativity, I'm not very happy with the implication that Jesus was not the first born of Mary, but I love your resourcefulness, your sense of humor, & the capacity to rhyme, as well as make people think...
Wed, April 9th, 2014 7:56amFunny and such clever use of words.Thoroughly entertaining.
Dee.
Oops,I have already reviewed this poem.I must be getting old!
Tue, January 19th, 2016 4:50pmAnother brilliantly written, funny poem. Well done!
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brucek
wow. you are good. i hope you have more coming. if you don't mind, i'd like to spread the word about your stuff. i know quite a few who will get a kick out of this.
Thu, December 8th, 2011 7:14amAuthor
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thanks brucek :)
Thu, December 15th, 2011 12:25pm