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Genre: Poetry |
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when one perceives a rainbow
as finale to a storm
this scientific wonder
is a blend of hue and form
the sun strikes water particles
and as reflection bends
it rises in an arch
and into colors, it transcends
but you will see this rainbow
in a slightly different view
than what is being noticed
by the person next to you
for rainbows are unique
and when those colors start to play
each person sees the splendor
in an altered sort of way
but you and i are soul mates
when God's artistry is done
our visions are united
and we see it, as if one
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Comment | 11 words
Sun, March 10th, 2013 10:27pm
Beautiful. Very nice. Enjoyed reading it and it really flowed effortlessly.
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Comment | 8 words
Mon, March 11th, 2013 1:39pm
thanks so much, glad you enjoyed :) - alvin
Comment | 12 words
Mon, March 11th, 2013 8:34pm
I thought they were magic!
Very interesting poem and much enjoyed!
Alice
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Comment | 6 words
Mon, March 11th, 2013 9:56pm
thanks so much Alice :) - alvin
Comment | 7 words
Thu, March 14th, 2013 1:24pm
Delightful and charming,I love it.
Dee:)-
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Comment | 8 words
Thu, March 14th, 2013 10:48pm
thanks Dee so glad you enjoyed :) - alvin
Comment | 10 words
Mon, March 18th, 2013 5:37am
Love rainbows and love your take on them here
Dibs
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Comment | 10 words
Mon, March 18th, 2013 9:24pm
rainbows are love notes from God, thanks Dibs :) - alvin
Comment | 1 words
Wed, March 20th, 2013 11:27am
cool
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Comment | 9 words
Wed, March 20th, 2013 10:57pm
squirrels were watching me write this one - alvin
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