THE BREATH OF GOD
Poem by: moonphish
we often think
the breath of God
we often strive
the breath of God
we tend to cry
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I hope so much that this is true.
It's a very comforting poem.
Well written,as always.
Dee.
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i am happy you found comfort in this Dee, :) - alvin
Good verse, though I do not agree with the last statement. Suicide is born of despair, of a life that is so unhappy that it can no longer exist. I can not believe if there is a god that he does not see that for some the burden of life is to great and that they need pity not to be condemned.
Dibs
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thanks Dibs...you make an excellent point - alvin
the last verse , is a bit strong, i know from experience that life can get to heavy sometimes. i don't think God would turn away from people in life and death too, at least i hope not .
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believe me...i was surprised as anyone at the last stanza...it was like automatic writing - alvin
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