Status:
Finished |
Genre: Poetry |
House:
Booksie Classic
All is calm
Like a lake in heaven
In an instant
His anger flares
Like toast forgotten under the grill
Fear shakes through her
A single look
A look that feels like a dentist drill
The smile of a man
Whose mind is not smiling?
Teeth jangling in her mouth
Like a pocket full of loose change
Her eye’s glowing
Two plums in a bowl of cream
Her face like a lost battle
Her feelings cold
As the ashes of love
There is nothing to separate her days
Like raindrops on the window pane
They run together
Then trickle away.
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Comments
Comment | 12 words
Tue, January 8th, 2008 1:34pm
Wow, good piece, I liked the metaphoric cadence of it. Well done.
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Comment | 22 words
Tue, January 8th, 2008 2:34pm
THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENT I AM VERY UNSURE OF MY WRITING IT IS NICE TO KNOW IT IS APPRECIATED. THANKS AGAIN
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Comment | 16 words
Tue, January 8th, 2008 5:10pm
Many of us have used this genre, yours stands up there with the best of them.
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Comment | 10 words
Tue, January 8th, 2008 5:12pm
thanks i am so pleased that people like my work
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