Catch The Tears

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Best friends are hard to forget.

All the words she did not say,
The hug she forgot to give,
A smile she never captured properly,
A soul that was never contained,
She knew now how much it hurt the heart,
And the purpose of tears,
This was a pit of regret she knew she would never escape,
Because she never got time to say goodbye,
It broke her heart to see it now,
The white carriage they had planned for years far in the future,
Now no-one understood,
Apart from those who had lost as much,
The rain cried itself from the sky,
It was an ironic metaphorical reference,
She would use it again someday,
But she would remember this everyday,
She bowed her head,
So no-one would be able to see,
Just how much she was hurting,
Because her best friend was gone,
There was nothing to be done but catch the tears.

Submitted: February 03, 2010

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Beautiful and extremely sad. You really did well on this. The emotion in this is so strong. I remember this happening to me... Loved it. :)

Thu, February 4th, 2010 12:56am


Thank-you so much :)
I have never written poetry before, so I'm glad you liked it!

Sat, February 6th, 2010 8:54am


That was really BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! really sad but really beautiful!

Thu, February 18th, 2010 1:09am


ahh, thankyou :)

Fri, February 26th, 2010 1:40pm

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