Forgive me my scars

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Original title: 'Suicide Note.'
Personally, I don’t have any issues with myself. I just have a high sensitivity level and I can move myself in other peoples shoes, sometimes.

I write these words
As my hand moves my pencil
A suicide note
With some dark deep secrets
As tears fall down
I fake a smile
I’m sorry I can’t hide this all
I hope these words won’t hurt you as much
You’ll always keep a special place,
right here in my heart
My end has come
At least for me
Now I can find peace
And live the life I was meant to live
Right above along the moon and stars
Please forgive me,
forgive me my scars.

Submitted: September 16, 2014

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rzlane7777777

Wow, very interesting. I like how it goes and I understand how you feel, a little. I can't put myself in others shoes all the time but I do try. Thanks for the interesting poem.

Tue, September 16th, 2014 6:59pm

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No problem :) I read a lot of thing sometimes about how people feel, so I guess it is a bit easier for me, or it comes natural to me to put myself in other people's shoes... I don't know :) But thank you!

Mon, October 20th, 2014 4:03am

MorningOfDecember

I know it is interesting, a lot of people (who read it) told me that they could see themselves in the poem.

Thank you so much for your comment!

Tue, September 16th, 2014 7:30pm

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Mon, October 20th, 2014 4:08am