I wrote this a long time ago, and found it to be lovely. I hope you enjoy it, it's a representation of how I see the world.

Hold tight, this feeling's only temporary
Stand by- hoping you'll crash thoroughly
Looking through me, your eyes, peering into my bleeding soul
That of a beast, rarely a beauty
Originating from a different breed
Fall in to me..The moon sits pretty
Unleash your inner demon
He's a liar, so she'll lie on her back
Why, it's only human nature
Sirens screaming. Ambulance searching
Unknowing, disabled
Where is she at?
Newfound misery
They've located her body
What a beautiful day for a funeral.
To live, to kill, to cry, to die
Planned, fate is calling
So, breathe in
Your exhalation is numbered, counting down
Until the day the angels dance upon your grave
Fight against this, the natural balance
Making the feelings stay, you may have your way
Her eyes staring through you
Wishing to feel beautiful

Submitted: January 20, 2007

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This one is sad but it draws you in. Magnetic to the emotions. It's wonderful.

Sat, January 20th, 2007 9:07pm


Thank you for your comments and support.

Sun, June 10th, 2007 1:19pm


love this poem. really amazing. short sentences. err...very nice. best yet. i read all the way through (and that's a complement).


Sat, January 20th, 2007 10:41pm


thank you! I was hoping with the way I typed it that it'd be more compelling and a little easier to read. thanks for reading/commenting!

Sun, June 10th, 2007 1:25pm

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