From George’s head to the Pollock holes
The wind blows hard and the water rolls
People struggle up the strand
Raincoats on, umbrellas in hand
Hats fly off across the beach
Always blowing out of reach
Hardy swimmers brave the sea
As darkness falls at ten past three
Across the sky thunder crashes
Out over the bay lightning flashes
Torrential rain rips thru’ the air
Girls try in vain to save their hair
All run like mad in search of cover
A distraught babe wails for his mother
Beach now deserted, sad, forlorn
Windbreaks abandoned, tattered, torn
Is this some freak storm from o’er the sea?
No, its just summer in Kilkee!
Submitted: September 30, 2006
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Beautifully evoked, great rhythm and excellent rhyming. Actually feels like the rhythm of walking round Kilkee on such a day! That mix between getting out for a walk, and wanting to get back into the warmth as soon as possible! Really enjoyed it, thanks.
Hi,
We are publishing a new book on Kilkee this summer called "Kilkee Moments" and it is for a charitable organisation called The Kilkee Marine Rescue Service, it is mainly photographic. We are wondering if you woulld mind if we published your poem in our book? More details can be found on our website www.kilkeemoments.ie or our facebook page, also called "Kilkee Moments", we will look forward to your response!
Kind Regards
Jerome
That's fantastic, thanks! Would you like to be accredited as Mr Benn, please contact us at kilkeemoments@gmail.com if you wish to be accredited otherwise? Thanks again!
Thu, March 15th, 2012 11:19pmFacebook Comments
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violetcove
Excellent meter and rhyme. Ireland is one place I've yet to go and really hope to get there one day. Your imagery is beautiful .
Fri, December 1st, 2006 4:21amAuthor
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Thanks for reading and you comments violet
Fri, December 1st, 2006 2:42am