A ticket to somewhere

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Contently Deranged Travelers

A journey into each others minds.

We are the contently deranged travelers

imagination is our station

wherever we go

our words will flow

until we've reached our destination.


We travel light

through day and night

seeking inspiration

endlessly we journey

in a world of trepidation.


Words are our foremost power

even in the darkest hour

our saviour is our bond

and our minds the magic wand.


We don't believe in hocus pocus

the journey's end is our main focus

until the final paragraph

whilst those defeated

madly laugh !


Mr. Watson.

April 2016


Submitted: April 03, 2016

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Jeff Bezaire

A wonderfully written anthem, sir! I like how you worked in a couple of different Houses.

Sun, April 3rd, 2016 6:35pm


were all going somewhere Jeff, nowhere is a distant place ! Thanks for reading and commenting.

Mon, April 4th, 2016 1:24pm

H. Adams

Love this, Mr. W. I think it perfectly describes the House it was posted to as well as some others. :)

Sun, April 3rd, 2016 6:42pm


We all feed off each other Hanorbi. Inspiration isn't hard to find on Booksie. We all know little of each other, only what we write, it does not matter what gender we are. Creativity has no rules, young and old all sitting at the same table. Thats nice.

Mon, April 4th, 2016 1:35pm

B Douglas Slack

I'd say that sums it up nicely!


Sun, April 3rd, 2016 9:03pm


Just the ticket Tom ! Thanks for looking in.

Mon, April 4th, 2016 1:17pm

Mrs Cowell

I like that a lot. You do make me think about different things which i dont normally think about when I read your poems.

Mon, April 4th, 2016 7:32am


Im pleased it gets the grey cells going Mrs.C. Thanks for commenting and thinking ! it means a lot.

Mon, April 4th, 2016 1:39pm

Vance Currie

I am not a fan of poetry - mainly because I am useless at it - but I like this one and the story it tells. ~ Joe

Mon, April 4th, 2016 7:55pm


A story of the mind Fernglow, Creativity comes from within. We all inspire each other in my eyes.
Thanks for commenting.

Mon, April 4th, 2016 1:21pm


A wonderful look at the journey of imagination and a writers path. It really made me smile and was a great trip in itself! Thanks for sharing, ZB.

Thu, April 14th, 2016 6:44pm


I'm pleased you enjoyed the trip Zany. Next time I'll buy a return ticket it was hell of a walk back ! Ha..Ha..

Sun, May 8th, 2016 12:34pm


As long as you keep writing this... I'll come along with you,, man... Well done, this one...

Fri, April 15th, 2016 2:16am


Thank you for those kind words BlackMyst. Just the ticket.

Sun, May 8th, 2016 12:39pm

Jason Crager

Awesome piece! Love the "our minds the magic wand" line. Excellent nod to the house.

Sat, April 30th, 2016 9:25pm


Thanks Ronin. We all have a little magic in us !

Sun, May 8th, 2016 1:04pm


Yep, I liked this one too.

Sat, May 14th, 2016 9:12pm

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