A lost Love

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This is a how my heart felt after i had lost a special man


Like a broken doll all in pieces that’s how I feel, Slowly the pieces are mended yet The cracks are left the scares of love. Will I ever be able to feel warmth happiness again?

I know it was only an affair yet I wonder if the cracks will fade and join as never there. I loved with all of my heart and soul thought you would be The knight in shining armour I was looking for and Love me as I loved you but it’s only now a memory like everything else.

I never knew the meaning of being in love Deep love the one that cuts like a knife. I have memories and that’s what I live with. So many happy onesandthe sacrifices I made for you.

The Heartache yet, now over the years the cracks have started to heal. Yet when I think about another relationship I get so scared. Tears fall to the floor. Emptiness left dreams in shatters.

I see you now leading a life not opening your eyes, Yet maybe you could have something better. I will wait and watch yet in the end it will be too late for you and me.

I have to try now to learn to love again leave you behind me. Still if one day you will ever know that I truly loved you. That will be enough for me.

I look to the future wondering what is in store for me round the next corner. Only fate will know that. How ever at least I understand the true meaning of love now. And I have you to thank for that MY DARLING KEITH

Submitted: September 07, 2007

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I think it was a very good story.

Thu, February 21st, 2008 10:37am


Thankyou for your kind comment Til Later Juliet

Thu, February 21st, 2008 3:39pm


it's a honest one....very nice, Juliet

Sun, April 27th, 2008 2:22am


Thankyou for you kind comment

Sat, April 26th, 2008 7:36pm

Angie Blake

Very nice. I think you've captured the fallen pieces of love. Always remember what lessons have taught you and to move on from there. You will love again! :) Nicely done! :)

Sat, September 29th, 2012 3:04pm

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