FEAR IS GREATER THAN LOVE
And take me AWAY.
Submitted: November 19, 2007
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Good work Juliet
Regards Brian
Another good write, Juliet. Thanks for sharing......Jerry
Tue, November 20th, 2007 4:00pmI would like to thank all o you for reaading this peice of work and for your great comments i am away at the moment and unable for some reason i not sure why i can't send comments one by one so thankyou to all take care JULIET
Tue, November 20th, 2007 9:27pmNice poem. Great use of structure and rhyme, the highly controlled rhyme pattern works very well in this piece but maybe you should try branching out to a freer form? Just a suggestion.
Your right often fear overides love. But i hope you gain the courage to leave the bastard whom this poem is about, if you havent already done so, and find someone who treats you decently.
Keep up the great work.
I have known this kind of desperation...many years ago with my first husband (before I met the love of my life)and the fear that drives it's very core...I was one of the lucky ones...I got free...you have captured the feeling of desperation in this work...I pray it will serve to free others who are bound by this fear...
Evelyn
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Hmm...I'm fearing it. It's beautiful. :)
Mon, November 19th, 2007 7:03amAuthor
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Glad you like this regards juliet
Wed, November 21st, 2007 3:43am