No Place For Me

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How i said goodbuy to some one i new

Another day has ended and home I start to go,

The traffics heavy with cars going only where the drivers know,

It starts to rain that’s all I need after the day that I’ve just had,

It’s poring now getting hard to see,

The car in front it breaks I nearly hit him hard,

Slow down I thought let the others race,

I will get home eventually.

Driving down towards my front door what will be there tonight.

A happy greeting or a drunken bum,

I park the car and take a breath,

Turn the key in the door tense again,

No more I thought this time you can go,

I walked into the lounge and there you are,

Sat perch upon your throne again,

A beer in one hand the TV remote in the other.

I stood still for a moment and just stared,

Is this what life is all bout,

No there has to be something better out there,

I stood so tall and proud and spoke these words to you,

“If you don’t leave this house I will end up hating you”

I got a reaction straight away.

He said “But why”

I said “it’s plain to see the drink and you plus the TV there’s just seems no place for me”.


Submitted: September 09, 2007

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lady clarissa

i liked this one a lot as it touches on everyday life for some its precise n it gives a message also another great one .. keep up the good work

Sun, September 9th, 2007 10:24pm

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Thankyou clarissa for your wonderful comments

Tue, September 11th, 2007 3:53pm

wistful

So it seems we all endure such hardships and pain. Sometimes I want to give up, but I can't. I've seen and have beauty in my life. I and everyone else will prevail.

Sun, October 21st, 2007 1:27am

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Wistful thankyou for your kind comments.

Sun, October 21st, 2007 10:51am

freakyalien

Having been there, done that and bought the tshirt I can so relate to this! But my final words to him were 'No I dont anymore!' He had asked me if I still loved him! x x

Thu, December 6th, 2007 8:03pm

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Glad you liked it and can relate great being free!! have a great day Juliet

Fri, December 7th, 2007 3:39pm

PRAVEEN

THE MOMENT OF RECKONING IS VIVID.-PRAVEEN

Thu, March 13th, 2008 2:59pm

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Praveen...it was great..thanks for reading..take care Juliet

Thu, March 13th, 2008 4:54pm

Brian W

I liked the poem and glad you were strong enough to say "get out"

Mon, January 19th, 2009 11:19pm

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It was a great day..Thankyou Juliet

Wed, January 21st, 2009 9:43am

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